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It was Pascal's familiar, shooting arrows across the roof again with a longbow. Her archery style was ''odd'', to say the least. Her ability to pull the bow also clearly relied on magic, as there was no way a small, thin girl like her could exert the arm strength.
 
It was Pascal's familiar, shooting arrows across the roof again with a longbow. Her archery style was ''odd'', to say the least. Her ability to pull the bow also clearly relied on magic, as there was no way a small, thin girl like her could exert the arm strength.
   
"Good morning, Miss Suvorsky!" Ariadne called out as she guided Edelweiss into a flawless landing atop the dormitory keep. Having only spoken to the familiar girl once before, Ariadne had to tap her memory necklace -- which she used as a diary -- for a reminder on the other girl's name.
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"Good morning, Miss Suvorsky!" Ariadne called out as she guided Edelweiss into a flawless landing atop the dormitory keep. Having only spoken to the familiar girl once before, Ariadne had to tap her memory necklace --which she used as a diary-- for a reminder on the other girl's name.
   
 
"Good morning, uh, milady." The same could not be said for the other girl as she stood uncertain.
 
"Good morning, uh, milady." The same could not be said for the other girl as she stood uncertain.
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"You're writing a new military doctrine?" She asked, her mind barely grasping the reality of the parchment in her hands. ''He's only twenty!''
 
"You're writing a new military doctrine?" She asked, her mind barely grasping the reality of the parchment in her hands. ''He's only twenty!''
   
"Many of the basic concepts were already employed by my father during the War of Imperial Succession ten years ago, the same war that earned him a hero's fame and the title Landgrave of Nordkreuz." Pascal actually had enough humility for a faint blush for once. "But I need as many field examples as possible. Since you are into reading all those boring history books, finding the right battle records for me to examine will be your task!"
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"Many of the basic concepts were already employed by my father during the War of Imperial Succession ten years ago, the same war that earned him a hero's fame and the title Landgrave of Nordkreuz."
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Pascal actually had enough humility for a faint blush for once.
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"But I need as many field examples as possible. Since you are into reading all those boring history books, finding the right battle records for me to examine will be your task!"
   
 
Kaede didn't mind studying. If anything, she ''enjoyed'' learning. But, as her gaze swept across the table and saw the dozens of dusty tomes piled up in thick columns, she could feel her eyelids tiring already.
 
Kaede didn't mind studying. If anything, she ''enjoyed'' learning. But, as her gaze swept across the table and saw the dozens of dusty tomes piled up in thick columns, she could feel her eyelids tiring already.
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"I understand, Sir. But I can do that myself." His tone was on the verge of protesting.
 
"I understand, Sir. But I can do that myself." His tone was on the verge of protesting.
   
Kaede ''loved'' how they were talking about her -- not just in third person, but as though an experimental specimen -- when she stood within this very room.
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Kaede ''loved'' how they were talking about her --not just in third person, but as though an experimental specimen-- when she stood within this very room.
   
 
"Headmaster, Sir, don't I have rights as a human being for any say in this?"
 
"Headmaster, Sir, don't I have rights as a human being for any say in this?"
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"What does the headmaster mean by history not repeating itself?"
 
"What does the headmaster mean by history not repeating itself?"
   
"See, if you had done your research in human-to-human binding, you would have known that there is an unspoken taboo on pact magic between us and the Samarans," began the Professor. "Five hundred years ago, a Prince of the Polisian Federation -- the Grand Republic's predecessor state -- sealed a binding magical contract with his Samaran love. According to some Inner Sea historians, this was the event that unleashed the Great Plague, which killed a third of the population across Western Hyperion before a Samaran alchemist eventually synthesized a cure."
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"See, if you had done your research in human-to-human binding, you would have known that there is an unspoken taboo on pact magic between us and the Samarans," began the Professor. "Five hundred years ago, a Prince of the Polisian Federation --the Grand Republic's predecessor state-- sealed a binding magical contract with his Samaran love. According to some Inner Sea historians, this was the event that unleashed the Great Plague, which killed a third of the population across Western Hyperion before a Samaran alchemist eventually synthesized a cure."
   
 
"But..."
 
"But..."

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