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Sure, Kaede could leave. She had been thinking about it ever since she received the immigration documents from Captain Markov. She was sure Pascal would give her some money, even though most of his funds had been sunk into this war. But what then? She was stuck in a world where none of her skills were particularly marketable, in a body unfit for manual labor. Kaede knew that even her high school chemistry held no comparison against practical Hyperion alchemy -- she couldn't even list what compounds to mix for building mortar, let alone industrial reagents like 'Prussic Acid'.
 
Sure, Kaede could leave. She had been thinking about it ever since she received the immigration documents from Captain Markov. She was sure Pascal would give her some money, even though most of his funds had been sunk into this war. But what then? She was stuck in a world where none of her skills were particularly marketable, in a body unfit for manual labor. Kaede knew that even her high school chemistry held no comparison against practical Hyperion alchemy -- she couldn't even list what compounds to mix for building mortar, let alone industrial reagents like 'Prussic Acid'.
   
The Grand Republic of Samara was a mercantile oligarchy, not a European Union welfare state. She would have to rebuild her life from nothing. For a girl in this era with neither training nor trade, that meant she would most likely wind up as a domestic servant, subject to the whims of yet another master and mistress.
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The Grand Republic of Samara was an mercantile oligarchy, not a European Union welfare state. She would have to rebuild her life from nothing. For a girl in this era with neither training nor trade, that meant she would most likely wind up as a domestic servant, subject to the whims of yet another master and mistress.
   
 
''Is such a gamble really worth it?''
 
''Is such a gamble really worth it?''
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"Who are you?"
 
"Who are you?"
   
"Her name's Gwen, a local," Gaspard introduced.
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"Her name 's Gwen, a local," Gaspard introduced.
   
"I'm the resident alchemist and herbalist for nearby villages," Gwen smiled back as she presented a covered straw basket in her arms. "Was collecting herbs in forest before meeting your folks."
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"I'm the resident alchemist and herbalist for the nearby villages," Gwen smiled back as she presented a covered straw basket in her arms. "Was collecting herbs in the forest before coming across your folks."
   
 
"At this hour?" Kaede frowned as she looked around the hill. They were surrounded by dark, barren forests, hauntingly illuminated by only the dim purple light of the 'moon'.
 
"At this hour?" Kaede frowned as she looked around the hill. They were surrounded by dark, barren forests, hauntingly illuminated by only the dim purple light of the 'moon'.
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She brushed her skirt down and sat on a nearby rock -- a motion that became second nature after several months here.
 
She brushed her skirt down and sat on a nearby rock -- a motion that became second nature after several months here.
   
Gaspard had to translate back. Courtesy of the linguistics magic Pascal worked into their familiar bond, Kaede could speak a perfect Imperial. But it seemed Gwen had a limited understanding of the language and spoke only in Brython -- one of the three main languages of Rhin-Lotharingie. And while Kaede could understand Brython thanks to the slightly-awkward translation magic from her earrings, she couldn't speak it. Thankfully, the sergeant was multilingual, which in Hyperion meant he at least had a middle class education.
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Gaspard had to translate back. Courtesy of the linguistics magic Pascal worked into their familiar bond, Kaede could speak a perfect Imperial. But it seemed Gwen had a limited understanding of the language and spoke only in Brython -- one of the three main languages of Rhin-Lotharingie. And while Kaede could understand Brython thanks to the translation magic on her earrings, she couldn't speak it. Thankfully, the sergeant was multilingual, which in Hyperion meant he had at least a middle class education.
   
"There are herbs best picked in the early hours before daybreak," Gwen explained.
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"There are several herbs best picked in the early hours before daybreak," Gwen explained.
   
 
"And we spotted her in the woods and asked her to join us for a chat," Gaspard added, with a subtle nod that he had already verified that Gwen was telling the truth.
 
"And we spotted her in the woods and asked her to join us for a chat," Gaspard added, with a subtle nod that he had already verified that Gwen was telling the truth.
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"Well, you did," one of the men grumbled. Clearly, the sergeant wasn't always in the mood to translate.
 
"Well, you did," one of the men grumbled. Clearly, the sergeant wasn't always in the mood to translate.
   
Kaede wasn't sure what to make of Gwen, but the stranger seemed to harbor no ill intent. She shrugged it off after another moment of scrutiny. It was, after all, hard to lie to a ranger about knowledge of the wild.
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Kaede wasn't sure what to make of Gwen, but the stranger seemed to harbor no ill intent. She shrugged it off after another moment of scrutiny. It was, after all, hard to lie to a Ranger about knowledge of the wild.
   
 
"Aren't you a little far from Weichsel?" the woman asked, her eyes scanning Kaede's pseudo-uniform and especially the Knight's Cross.
 
"Aren't you a little far from Weichsel?" the woman asked, her eyes scanning Kaede's pseudo-uniform and especially the Knight's Cross.
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Kaede was still considering her answer when Gaspard finished translating for Gwen, and the older woman immediately took on a catty smile:
 
Kaede was still considering her answer when Gaspard finished translating for Gwen, and the older woman immediately took on a catty smile:
   
"Especially when you're in bed with him."
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"Especially when you're doing it with him."
   
 
Gaspard coughed and nearly choked while Kaede stared back with her eyes bulging.
 
Gaspard coughed and nearly choked while Kaede stared back with her eyes bulging.
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"It's because he didn't have any friends!" Kaede blurted out. "And for your information, I don't call him by either, just 'Pascal'!"
 
"It's because he didn't have any friends!" Kaede blurted out. "And for your information, I don't call him by either, just 'Pascal'!"
   
The awkwardness only increased when Gaspard had to act as interpreter.
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The awkwardness was only increased when Gaspard had to act as interpreter.
   
 
"Ah, so he's the immature kind who just wants to play house."
 
"Ah, so he's the immature kind who just wants to play house."
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"Well... after all our time together, he has become family," Kaede calmed down a little as she picked up a stick to poke at the fire. "We've gone through life-and-death together even before the war began."
 
"Well... after all our time together, he has become family," Kaede calmed down a little as she picked up a stick to poke at the fire. "We've gone through life-and-death together even before the war began."
   
The three men nodded in understanding. Aiding tribal members was a universal concept that anyone could grasp, especially longtime soldiers who had bonded with their units as a second family.
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The three men nodded in understanding. Aiding family members was a universal concept that anyone could grasp, especially longtime soldiers who had bonded with their units as a second tribe.
   
 
"Besides..." Kaede thought deeper. "For someone like me, it would be hard to simply walk away from this."
 
"Besides..." Kaede thought deeper. "For someone like me, it would be hard to simply walk away from this."
   
"Why is that?" The sergeant asked, curious. "You're not Lotharin. It's not your obligation to fight our war. The Caliphate hardly poses a threat to Weichsel."
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"Why is that?" The sergeant asked, curious. "If you're not a Lotharin, it's hardly your obligation to fight our war. The Caliphate hardly poses a threat to Weichsel."
   
 
"A religiously-motivated militant empire like the Caliphate eventually poses a threat to ''anyone'' who isn't Tauheed," she replied in serious.
 
"A religiously-motivated militant empire like the Caliphate eventually poses a threat to ''anyone'' who isn't Tauheed," she replied in serious.
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But they haven't come together to form a new brand of civilization. Not yet.
 
But they haven't come together to form a new brand of civilization. Not yet.
   
"Hyperion is a continent on the cusp of something historic, something that will shape the future for centuries to come," Kaede tried to explain. "And for once, I'm not just a passive spectator to the events of the world. Instead, I stand right next to some of the great actors who will shape the continent, a unique position to not just witness but also influence the turning pages of history itself.
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"You see, Hyperion is a continent on the cusp of something historic, something that will shape the future for centuries to come," Kaede tried to explain. "And for once, I'm not just a passive spectator to the events of the world. Instead, I stand right next to some of the great actors who will shape the continent, a unique position to not just witness but also influence the turning pages of history itself.
   
 
"How can I ''not'' take advantage of that? To help make this world a better place?"
 
"How can I ''not'' take advantage of that? To help make this world a better place?"
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"Just what was that about anyway?" A soldier's voice came from behind her.
 
"Just what was that about anyway?" A soldier's voice came from behind her.
   
"I have no clue..." Sergeant Gaspard answered. "But I'd heard that treewalking is an old druidic magic. Only a few faekissed still practice that nowadays."
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"I have no clue..." Sergeant Gaspard answered. "But I'd heard that treewalking is an old druidic magic. Only a few Faekissed still practice that nowadays."
   
 
His statement prompted Kaede to swivel around:
 
His statement prompted Kaede to swivel around:

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