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Aside from that, Three-Point’s also contain special occasions with group activities. Things like a gathering for a trip, celebrations for clubs, etc, are all very unlikely and therefore score high. |
Aside from that, Three-Point’s also contain special occasions with group activities. Things like a gathering for a trip, celebrations for clubs, etc, are all very unlikely and therefore score high. |
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− | Chances for Four-Point’s mostly come from specialized events; school festival is exemplary, but these events have to be participated |
+ | Chances for Four-Point’s mostly come from specialized events; school festival is exemplary, but these events have to be participated with intent: a distinct goal and preemptive steps to prevent any chances that lead to potential point loss. |
On the other hand, if the surrounding atmosphere doesn’t feel right and fails to build hype, it’s hard to get higher points during a sports festival. Most people can’t even enjoy sports to the fullest, reason being that gaps between individuals’ athletic abilities are far from small. |
On the other hand, if the surrounding atmosphere doesn’t feel right and fails to build hype, it’s hard to get higher points during a sports festival. Most people can’t even enjoy sports to the fullest, reason being that gaps between individuals’ athletic abilities are far from small. |
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‘I’m almost there.’ I took out my cell and sent a mail to the inbox of my recently-registered aunt. |
‘I’m almost there.’ I took out my cell and sent a mail to the inbox of my recently-registered aunt. |
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− | ‘I’ll meet you right away.’ The train hadn’t even |
+ | ‘I’ll meet you right away.’ The train hadn’t even slow down, and a reply already arrived. |
“.......” Was she serious? It’s hard to tell from a text! I deemed it to be a friendly response and put my cell back. |
“.......” Was she serious? It’s hard to tell from a text! I deemed it to be a friendly response and put my cell back. |