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As a sinner who shouldered all the guilt and blame in the world, she could only wet her face day after day with her tears. |
As a sinner who shouldered all the guilt and blame in the world, she could only wet her face day after day with her tears. |
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− | Everyone was speaking wicked words of her – an unchaste wife, a |
+ | Everyone was speaking wicked words of her – an unchaste wife, a traitor queen. |
Those foolish plebeians blinded by the glorious myths did not know the truth, but only surrounded her and reprimanded her all at once. |
Those foolish plebeians blinded by the glorious myths did not know the truth, but only surrounded her and reprimanded her all at once. |
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"... Ar… thur…” |
"... Ar… thur…” |
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+ | The called that slipped out of 'his' lips no longer meant anything. |
Even so, this silver swordsman who now knelt in the torrential rain was undoubtedly that person whom 'he' had both loved and hated in the past. |
Even so, this silver swordsman who now knelt in the torrential rain was undoubtedly that person whom 'he' had both loved and hated in the past. |