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The light was still faltering out, and there already was no surprise left in the heart of the spectators. It wasn't just a wild guess anymore that this was a fourth Servant who had made an appearance responding to Rider's provocation. The dreadful point is that the beginning of the hostilities was a gathering of four Servants already. Nobody could possibly conjecture what would be the outcome of turn of such events.
 
The light was still faltering out, and there already was no surprise left in the heart of the spectators. It wasn't just a wild guess anymore that this was a fourth Servant who had made an appearance responding to Rider's provocation. The dreadful point is that the beginning of the hostilities was a gathering of four Servants already. Nobody could possibly conjecture what would be the outcome of turn of such events.
   
As expected, the golden light came from 10 meters above, atop a street pole, where a figure standing in a shining armor could be seen. Waver held his breath at the sight of such dazzling dignity.
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As expected, the golden light came from 10 meters above, atop a street pole, where a figure standing in a shining armor could be seen. Waver held his breath from the dazzling dignity.
   
 
"This guy is..."
 
"This guy is..."
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Even Rider didn't expect anyone more domineering than himself to show up, as he was stroking his chin with a bewildered look, void of malice.
 
Even Rider didn't expect anyone more domineering than himself to show up, as he was stroking his chin with a bewildered look, void of malice.
   
"You are mistaken... I, Alexander, am the one who is well known throughout the world as the King of Conquerors."
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"You are mistaking... I, Alexander, am the one who is well known through the world as the King of Conquerors."
   
"Fool. The only hero in Heaven and Earth who is a real king is me. The rest are a collection of mongrels."
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"Fool. The only hero through Heaven and Earth who is a real king is me. The rest is a lump of mongrels."
   
 
Archer threw him aside with a declaration that was more than an insult. Of course, color was already drained from Saber's face, but the tolerant Rider drew an amazed sigh, ignoring<!-- ==== Page 337 ==== --> it altogether.
 
Archer threw him aside with a declaration that was more than an insult. Of course, color was already drained from Saber's face, but the tolerant Rider drew an amazed sigh, ignoring<!-- ==== Page 337 ==== --> it altogether.
   
"If you want to say that much, could you first announce yourself? If you are such a king, you couldn't be ashamed of your fame?"
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"If you want to say that much, could you first announce yourself? If you are such a king, you can't be ashamed of your fame?"
   
 
At Rider's banter, Archer's crimson eyes grew even more of a proud anger as he glared at the giant under him.
 
At Rider's banter, Archer's crimson eyes grew even more of a proud anger as he glared at the giant under him.
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Frankly speaking, Rider's point was reasonable, but apparently, Archer took it as an incorrigible disrespect from his point of view. This wasn't a matter of gaining interest from concealing one's true name, but rather from a personal irritability, the golden Heroic Spirit was emitting a very clear murderous intent.
 
Frankly speaking, Rider's point was reasonable, but apparently, Archer took it as an incorrigible disrespect from his point of view. This wasn't a matter of gaining interest from concealing one's true name, but rather from a personal irritability, the golden Heroic Spirit was emitting a very clear murderous intent.
   
"I grant you the honor of my presence yet you can't recognize me; such ignorance isn't even worth living."
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"I grant you the honor of my presence yet you can't recognize me, such ignorance isn't even worth living."
   
 
At Archer's conclusion, the space around him distorted in a haze― the next instant, the glow of beautiful blades started coming out of the empty space.
 
At Archer's conclusion, the space around him distorted in a haze― the next instant, the glow of beautiful blades started coming out of the empty space.
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Yes, it was undoubtedly the same. Archer was definitely the golden Servant who had defended the Tōsaka mansion from Assassin's invasion the previous night, in other words, this was Tōsaka Tokiomi's Servant.
 
Yes, it was undoubtedly the same. Archer was definitely the golden Servant who had defended the Tōsaka mansion from Assassin's invasion the previous night, in other words, this was Tōsaka Tokiomi's Servant.
   
"Haha, hahahaha..."
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"Haha, hahahaha"
   
 
In the darkness, an old hatred burning in his one bloodshot eye, Matō Kariya let a laugh escape.
 
In the darkness, an old hatred burning in his one bloodshot eye, Matō Kariya let a laugh escape.
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Still observing the black knight carefully, yet with a light tone, Lancer railed<!-- ==== Page 341 ==== --> at Rider. Taking the hit, Rider grimaced.
 
Still observing the black knight carefully, yet with a light tone, Lancer railed<!-- ==== Page 341 ==== --> at Rider. Taking the hit, Rider grimaced.
   
"Invited, eh? That one doesn't look like he'll take any negotiation, ugh."
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"Inviting, eh. That one doesn't look like he'll take any negotiation, uh."
   
 
Nothing but blood thirst flowed from the black knight. Even the whirlwind of prana seemed ominous as a groan full of deep hatred.
 
Nothing but blood thirst flowed from the black knight. Even the whirlwind of prana seemed ominous as a groan full of deep hatred.

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