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The eyes glowing widely in the slit of the helmet, first wandered in the empty space, having lost their target... Then, finding a new spoil, they flamed up again.
 
The eyes glowing widely in the slit of the helmet, first wandered in the empty space, having lost their target... Then, finding a new spoil, they flamed up again.
   
Stared at by those eyes dyed the color of malice, Saber felt a chill bustling through her spine.
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Stared at by those eyes dyed the color of malice, Saber felt a chill bustling through her back.
   
 
"... Ur..."
 
"... Ur..."

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