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The dense atmosphere made Irisviel sigh numerous times.
 
The dense atmosphere made Irisviel sigh numerous times.
   
“– Are you tired, Iri?”
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“– Are you tired, Iris?”
   
 
Kiritsugu asked. Irisviel hid her melancholic expression and shook her head with a smile.
 
Kiritsugu asked. Irisviel hid her melancholic expression and shook her head with a smile.
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Irisviel felt that her husband hugged her tighter, even hurting her. Then, her husband’s weak question sounded beside her ear.
 
Irisviel felt that her husband hugged her tighter, even hurting her. Then, her husband’s weak question sounded beside her ear.
   
“If right now I decide to throw away everything and run away from here – Iri, will you leave with me?”
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“If right now I decide to throw away everything and run away from here – Iris, will you leave with me?”
   
 
Probably, Irisviel would never be able to imagine that a man like Emiya Kiritsugu would ask such a question. She was so shocked she couldn’t speak for a while, and asked back only after a long pause:
 
Probably, Irisviel would never be able to imagine that a man like Emiya Kiritsugu would ask such a question. She was so shocked she couldn’t speak for a while, and asked back only after a long pause:

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