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“AAAALaLaLaLaie!!”
 
“AAAALaLaLaLaie!!”
   
The trampling rampage of Gordius Wheel • Wheel of Heaven's Authority in the sewer was just like a lightning-clad excavator. The body fluids and pieces of flesh of the monsters which was ran down, trampled and scorched, thickly filled the inside of the tunnel like a fog. Together on the carriage, it was as if Waver could not see his surroundings.
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The trampling rampage of Gordius Wheel • Wheel of Heaven's Authority in the sewer was just like a thunder-clad excavator. The body fluids and pieces of flesh of the monsters which was ran down, trampled and scorched, thickly filled the inside of the tunnel like a fog. Together on the carriage, it was as if Waver could not see his surroundings.
   
 
Riding alongside Rider at the coachman's box, if the protection field were not covering them, he would surely become not able to breathe, and would probably suffocate due to the splashing of blood from overflowing demons. In spite of that, the more he protected his breathing organs with magecraft shields, the more he had to block his sense of smell. If not, he would probably faint from the excessively heavy stench of intestines.
 
Riding alongside Rider at the coachman's box, if the protection field were not covering them, he would surely become not able to breathe, and would probably suffocate due to the splashing of blood from overflowing demons. In spite of that, the more he protected his breathing organs with magecraft shields, the more he had to block his sense of smell. If not, he would probably faint from the excessively heavy stench of intestines.
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Waver did not feel brave enough to ask what Rider had seen within the dark.
 
Waver did not feel brave enough to ask what Rider had seen within the dark.
   
Both of them boarded the driver's seat of the chariot again. Rider took up the reins, and the raging bulls bellowed angrily, sending lightning in the darkness.
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Both of them boarded the driver's seat of the chariot again. Rider took up the reins, and the raging bulls bellowed angrily, sending thunder in the darkness.
   
 
“Sorry for the cramped space, but there's something I really count on you, Children of Zeus. Burn this place down to ashes!!”
 
“Sorry for the cramped space, but there's something I really count on you, Children of Zeus. Burn this place down to ashes!!”

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