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“There are some of them who are still breathing, but......in that condition, it would be more merciful to kill them off.”
 
“There are some of them who are still breathing, but......in that condition, it would be more merciful to kill them off.”
   
Waver did not feel brave enough to ask what Rider had seen within the dark.
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Waver did not feel him brave enough to ask what Rider had seen within the dark.
   
 
Both of them boarded the driver's seat of the chariot again. Rider took up the reins, and the raging bulls bellowed angrily, sending lightning in the darkness.
 
Both of them boarded the driver's seat of the chariot again. Rider took up the reins, and the raging bulls bellowed angrily, sending lightning in the darkness.
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Or rather, he couldn't drink. Every time, even by merely sitting beside Rider watching him drink sake, Waver would feel sick at the strong odor of alcohol.
 
Or rather, he couldn't drink. Every time, even by merely sitting beside Rider watching him drink sake, Waver would feel sick at the strong odor of alcohol.
   
“Hmph, I'm not even expecting this chick-like you to accompany me! Aaaahhh~ Boring! Isn't there any river bank where I can get happily drunk? ......Oooh, that's it!”
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“Hmph, I'm not even expecting this chick-like you to accompany me! Aaaahhh~Boring! Isn't there any river bank where I can get happily drunk? ......Oooh, that's it!”
   
 
''Pomp!!'' Rider clapped his hands together knowingly.
 
''Pomp!!'' Rider clapped his hands together knowingly.

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