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From the distant west, an army arrived, sweeping rolls of dust at its wake. No one dared to underestimate this invading army since the beginning.
 
From the distant west, an army arrived, sweeping rolls of dust at its wake. No one dared to underestimate this invading army since the beginning.
   
Rumors about its might had already swept through the entire country like a gale long before this army arrived. Usurping the throne of the small country Macedonia in the far west country of Greece, the young king had since then subdued the neighboring countries in the blink of an eye, and became the leader of Corinth.
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Rumors about its might had already swept through the entire country like a gale long before this army arrived. They concerned the young ruler who usurped the throne from his own father’s hands in a small country named Macedonia in far-away Greece, and swept over Corinth in the blink of an eye.
 
   
 
Alexander –
 
Alexander –
   
It was said that his ambition crossed over the Straits, and he had wanted to extend his insolent neck into this great empire of Persia.
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It was said that his ambitions even extended over the Strait, and dared to think of sinking his teeth into the great Persian Empire.
   
 
Of course, none of the brave warriors who swore utter loyalty to protect their glorious country would bow their heads before the invader. The warriors bet their augustness and honor as soldiers upon this and countered the attack of Alexander’s army. However, the soaring morale of the enemy that appeared before them terrified them horribly, and they shivered in fright.
 
Of course, none of the brave warriors who swore utter loyalty to protect their glorious country would bow their heads before the invader. The warriors bet their augustness and honor as soldiers upon this and countered the attack of Alexander’s army. However, the soaring morale of the enemy that appeared before them terrified them horribly, and they shivered in fright.
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The men who finally understood this held up the weapons in their hands once again.
 
The men who finally understood this held up the weapons in their hands once again.
   
They were neither heroes, nor generals- they were just ordinary youths, having just taken out their armor and weapons from the inside of the storeroom. Those hearts from which pride and willpower had been lost, regained only the heavy thumpings of their hearts at that time, and they went after the back of the great king traveling to the east.
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Now, they were no longer heroes, no longer weapons. They were only the youths they once were, who picked up their armor and weapons for the first time and chased their eternal dream. Those hearts, which once again picked up courage and hope, beat tempestuously and marched after their owners, and followed the kingdom that progressed straight towards the East.
   
 
Thus, the army of the King increased endlessly with his victories on his road of progress.
 
Thus, the army of the King increased endlessly with his victories on his road of progress.

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