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And if Rider really lost, then – what would a Master as useless as himself do?
 
And if Rider really lost, then – what would a Master as useless as himself do?
   
This kind of battle… if this goes on until the end, then there would definitely be no changes in him.
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This kind if battle… if this goes on until the end, then there would definitely be no changes in him.
   
 
It would only display his incapacity, insignificance and humiliation even more when he’s beside an overly powerful Heroic Spirit. This made Waver more ashamed that the humiliation he went through at the Clock Tower.
 
It would only display his incapacity, insignificance and humiliation even more when he’s beside an overly powerful Heroic Spirit. This made Waver more ashamed that the humiliation he went through at the Clock Tower.
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Rider lifted his head and looked towards the sky.
 
Rider lifted his head and looked towards the sky.
   
“True, if your figure were more imposing, then it’d look more fitting compared to now.”
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“True, if your figure is more imposing, then it’d look more fitting compared to now.”
   
 
The King of Conquerors’s half mocking reply ignited all the anger in Waver’s heart in an instant. As the short Master became even angrier and almost erupted, Rider suddenly took out the world map that never left his side and spoke while pointing at the first page.
 
The King of Conquerors’s half mocking reply ignited all the anger in Waver’s heart in an instant. As the short Master became even angrier and almost erupted, Rider suddenly took out the world map that never left his side and spoke while pointing at the first page.

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