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The first day at a new school, 7:22 a.m.
 
The first day at a new school, 7:22 a.m.
   
Masaki landed at Canaan, the floating academy city.
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Masaki Landed at Canaan, the floating academy city.
   
 
"Phew, it's so hot..."
 
"Phew, it's so hot..."
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Canaan was a huge town, floating 1000 meters up in the sky.
 
Canaan was a huge town, floating 1000 meters up in the sky.
   
The entire area was said to be 24 square kilometers big which is almost the size of a ward in the Tokyo Metropolitan area.
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The entire area was said to be 24 square kilometers big which is almost the size of one wards in the Tokyo Metropolitan area.
   
 
The only way to get there was by taking an Air Train.
 
The only way to get there was by taking an Air Train.
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In front of the main gates of the train station, there was a plaza, in it’s center was a water fountain, and beyond that there were department stores, restaurants and recreational buildings. It was a place that bustled business, and a happy aura hung in the air.
 
In front of the main gates of the train station, there was a plaza, in it’s center was a water fountain, and beyond that there were department stores, restaurants and recreational buildings. It was a place that bustled business, and a happy aura hung in the air.
   
The second floor was composed of nothing but walkways and plazas, while the vehicles moved about beneath them on the ground floor. The walkways and roadways were completely separated from each other; which was a rare cutting-edge design in this era.
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The second floor was composed of nothing but walkways and plazas, while the vehicles moved about beneath them on the ground floor. The walkways and roadways were completely separated from each other; which was a rare cutting-edge design in this era.
   
 
––A cool cup of ice tea would be great.
 
––A cool cup of ice tea would be great.
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Was it because of her family heritage?
 
Was it because of her family heritage?
   
She was called "Sakurazaka Shirley", and Masaki was pretty sure her mother was an American.
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She was called "Sakurazaka Shirley", and I’m pretty sure her mother was an American.
   
 
"...Well of course you’ve changed, you've grown up after all."
 
"...Well of course you’ve changed, you've grown up after all."
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While they were walking.
 
While they were walking.
   
Shirley told Masaki about the town that she had lived in for seven years, as they made there way towards their school.
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Shirley told Masaki about the town that she had lived in for seven years, as they made there way towards there school.
   
 
Well, this is the Floating Academy Town Canaan. So they quickly reached the school.
 
Well, this is the Floating Academy Town Canaan. So they quickly reached the school.
 
 
Masaki and the other people around him faced one of the huge school buildings that were in the town.
 
Masaki and the other people around him faced one of the huge school buildings that were in the town.
   

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