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=== Part 2 ===
 
=== Part 2 ===
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He took the automatic bus from the station plaza and fifteen minutes later he got off at <Alrescha> bus stop.
 
He took the automatic bus from the station plaza and fifteen minutes later he got off at <Alrescha> bus stop.
   
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Since he was new and his arm was intertwined with Shirley's, everyone's attention was on him.
 
Since he was new and his arm was intertwined with Shirley's, everyone's attention was on him.
 
 
"Masaki, have you heard about the classes yet?"
 
"Masaki, have you heard about the classes yet?"
   
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"Is it all classrooms!? I thought this was a corporation building, not a school."
 
"Is it all classrooms!? I thought this was a corporation building, not a school."
   
"Ahaha. From the 1st to the 29th floor there's nothing but special classrooms, from the 30th to the 35th are the teacher's rooms, then up to the 40th are the 1st year classrooms, up to the 45th are the second year classrooms and up to the 50th are the 3rd year classrooms."
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"Ahaha. From the 1st to the 29th floor there nothing but special classrooms, from the 30th to the 35th are the teacher's rooms, then up to the 40th are the 1st year classrooms, up to the 45th are the second year classrooms and up to the 50th are the 3rd year classrooms."
   
 
"Woah~...what about from the 51st floor to the top?"
 
"Woah~...what about from the 51st floor to the top?"
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They passed through the entrance and into a passage that was wide enough to be called a station concourse, and again they went through a large hall. This seemed to be the heart of the skyscraper.
 
They passed through the entrance and into a passage that was wide enough to be called a station concourse, and again they went through a large hall. This seemed to be the heart of the skyscraper.
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In the center of the hall was a wall where a curve was drawn, or maybe it should be called a round pillar. Many elevators were lined up, and on the wall where the words <<ELEVATOR PILLAR>> was written.
 
In the center of the hall was a wall where a curve was drawn, or maybe it should be called a round pillar. Many elevators were lined up, and on the wall were the words <<ELEVATOR PILLAR>>.
 
   
 
One by one, the students went inside them.
 
One by one, the students went inside them.
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"It isn't mountain climbing you know."
 
"It isn't mountain climbing you know."
   
While they were standing there talking, somebody at the back loudly exclaimed "Wha–!?" in a sharp voice.
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While they where standing there talking, somebody at the back loudly exclaimed "Wha–!?" in a sharp
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voice.
   
 
As soon as he turned around, he saw a man's eyes widen in shock.
 
As soon as he turned around, he saw a man's eyes widen in shock.
   
The man seemed to have a well-built physique, had short evenly cut hair and had a squareish face, all of this together gave off a grim impression. Everyone's eyes were turned towards Masaki and Shirley.
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The man seemed to have a well-built physique, had short evenly cut hair and had a square-ish face, all of this together gave off a grim impression. Everyone's eyes were turned towards Masaki and Shirley.
   
 
He talked like he wanted to wring every last drop out of Masaki.
 
He talked like he wanted to wring every last drop out of Masaki.
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"Hmm? He's Masaki."
 
"Hmm? He's Masaki."
   
It was an lethargic answer. Since she didn't use a lot of words, Masaki decided to add to it.
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It was an unenergetic answer. Since she didn't use a lot of words, Masaki decided to add to it.
   
 
"I'm Kusunoki Masaki. Today is my first day at this school."
 
"I'm Kusunoki Masaki. Today is my first day at this school."
   
"A transfer student? Then have you just awoken? This guy is entwined with Sakurazaka-san's a, arm..."
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"A transfer student? Then have you just awoken? This guy is entwined with Sakurazaka-san's a,
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arm..."
   
 
His shoulders started shaking.
 
His shoulders started shaking.
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"Who...is he?"
 
"Who...is he?"
   
"This guys name is Ishounuma, and he is my classmate, and now yours. That's all."
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"This guys name is Ishounuma, and he is classmate to me, and now you. That's all."
   
 
"Sakurazaka-san, that isn't all, right?"
 
"Sakurazaka-san, that isn't all, right?"
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Even though this was his first time meeting Masaki, he acted really aggressive towards him.
 
Even though this was his first time meeting Masaki, he acted really aggressive towards him.
 
 
Masaki shrunk back.
 
Masaki shrunk back.
   
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However, even that didn't settle Ishounuma's anger. Instead, his eyes became bloodshot.
 
However, even that didn't settle Ishounuma's anger. Instead, his eyes became bloodshot.
   
"Yo, You're not using honorifics with her name...!? Hey, you! Even though you've been Sakurazaka-san's acquaintance for some time, it doesn't mean that you can act over-familiar with her does it!?"
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"Yo, You're not using honorifics with her name...!? Hey, you! Even though you've been Sakurazaka-san's acquaintance for some time, it doesn't mean that you can act over-familiar with her right!?"
   
 
"I didn't mean to do that."
 
"I didn't mean to do that."

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