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=== Part 3 ===
 
=== Part 3 ===
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"Sorry about that Masaki, things started getting a little strange."
 
"Sorry about that Masaki, things started getting a little strange."
   
Shirley said this while we were going up the stairs.
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She said while we were going up the stairs.
   
"Don't worry about it. It wasn't your fault. While it was a little unusual, he's only our classmate you know?"
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"Don't worry about it. It wasn't your fault. It was a little unusual, but he's only my classmate you know?"
   
 
"Of course!"
 
"Of course!"
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Shirley looked troubled.
 
Shirley looked troubled.
   
"In my first year, I didn't have a partner, so Ishounuma asked me to be his."
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"In first year, I didn't have a partner so Ishounuma asked me to be his."
   
 
"Really!? Did you two hang around with each other a lot, was it like that?"
 
"Really!? Did you two hang around with each other a lot, was it like that?"
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"Ah...the committee."
 
"Ah...the committee."
   
"But in the end I didn't become his partner since I paired up with someone else. I wonder if he misunderstood it because I didn't turn him down clearly? Well, it did look like we were pretty close."
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"But in the end I didn't become his partner since I paired up with someone else. I wonder if he misunderstood it because I didn't turn him down clearly? Well it did look like we were pretty close."
   
"But I think no matter who it is, it's best to be on good terms with them."
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"But I think no matter who it is, it's good to be on good terms with them."
   
 
"Ye~s, but I didn't mean to cause trouble between us...but isn't it weird that I'm thought to be on particularly good terms with that guy by everyone else? It's strange! Strange!"
 
"Ye~s, but I didn't mean to cause trouble between us...but isn't it weird that I'm thought to be on particularly good terms with that guy by everyone else? It's strange! Strange!"
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"I don't think it can be helped as long as he talks like that."
 
"I don't think it can be helped as long as he talks like that."
   
"Well...you could have said that he was being annoying, right. Did you say that?"
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"Well...you could have said that he was being annoying, right."
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"Did you say that?"
   
 
"So many times. I said it plainly as well!"
 
"So many times. I said it plainly as well!"
   
Masaki had never been approached by someone of the opposite gender, so he couldn't imagine what it would be like, but he was able to understand that this was troubling for Shirley.
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Masaki had never been approached by someone of the opposite sex so he couldn't imagine what it would be like, but he was able to understand that this was troubling for Shirley.
   
 
On the stairs landing, Shirley suddenly turned around to face Masaki.
 
On the stairs landing, Shirley suddenly turned around to face Masaki.
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"I'm just making sure, but you're not having a strange misunderstanding right?"
 
"I'm just making sure, but you're not having a strange misunderstanding right?"
   
"It's alright since you explained everything. Of course, I understand and believe you."
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"It's alright since you explained everything. Of course, I believe you."
   
 
"Then, that's fine... I would never have a special relationship with someone who discriminates by level!"
 
"Then, that's fine... I would never have a special relationship with someone who discriminates by level!"
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"Don't worry about it. It's just a number."
 
"Don't worry about it. It's just a number."
   
"In fact, I don't know anything about this...are levels important?"
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"In fact, I don't know very much about it...are levels important?"
   
 
A surprised look appeared on her face.
 
A surprised look appeared on her face.
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Masaki was astonished. He stared intensely at Shirley.
 
Masaki was astonished. He stared intensely at Shirley.
   
"Amazing! You've really have changed from when you were a child."
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"Amazing! You've really changed from when you were a child."
   
"Wh, what? So suddenly."
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"Wh,what? So suddenly."
   
 
"I didn't expect such difficult-sounding words to come out so smoothly from your mouth."
 
"I didn't expect such difficult-sounding words to come out so smoothly from your mouth."
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Shirley stuck out her chest happily.
 
Shirley stuck out her chest happily.
   
"I think it's really amazing. And? What kind of things are Dialecte and Globaliser?"
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"I think it's really amazing. And? What kind of thing is Dialecte and Globaliser?"
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Shirley stiffened. Her face formed a frown.
   
Shirley stiffened. Her face formed a frown, and she groaned.
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While she groaned.
   
 
"Uuu...What did you say? I feel like going "Yaa! Whump!". Nya-"
 
"Uuu...What did you say? I feel like going "Yaa! Whump!". Nya-"
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Shirley disappeared seven years ago because of her ability.
 
Shirley disappeared seven years ago because of her ability.
   
And thanks to that ability, he was now able to reunite with Shirley.
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And thanks to that talent, now he was able to reunite with Shirley.
   
 
"...Since my ability is really meager, I doubt it'd be useful for anything even if I study and go as far as changing schools."
 
"...Since my ability is really meager, I doubt it'd be useful for anything even if I study and go as far as changing schools."
   
"It's normal for a persons power to be weak and their level to be low, when they've only just awoken. I think that it'll start changing from now on, right?"
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"It's normal for the power to be weak and the level to be low, when you've only just awoken. I think that it'll change from now on, right?"
   
"Oh, so is the strength of the ability equals the level?"
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"Oh, so is the strength of the ability the level?"
   
"It kinda does. The teacher said something about test results to."
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"It kinda is. The teacher said something about test results."
   
 
"Is it important in this school?"
 
"Is it important in this school?"
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"I see, that's really persuasive."
 
"I see, that's really persuasive."
   
Shirley told me that she was in class A.
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Shirley said that she was in class A.
   
 
If we go in the order of levels, then could it be called the best class?
 
If we go in the order of levels, then could it be called the best class?
   
So the guy called Ishounuma seems to be in the same class as Shirley, and by judging from his attitude, he probably has a high level too.
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So the guy called Ishounuma seems to be in the same class as Shirley. Judging from his attitude, he probably has a high level too.
   
 
"You don't need to worry about that. The level is just a number, a number~"
 
"You don't need to worry about that. The level is just a number, a number~"
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She had a serious expression on her face.
 
She had a serious expression on her face.
   
"You only need to do one thing, and that's to be positive! I don't discriminate people by their levels or stuff like that!"
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"You only need one thing, and that's to be positive! I don't discriminate people by their levels or stuff like that!"
   
 
"...Understood."
 
"...Understood."
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Shirley gave a smile as she turned around.
 
Shirley gave a smile as she turned around.
   
It seemed to be normal that Masaki who had just awoken still have a low level. She must have been worried about him. Since their relationship wasn't equal anymore, Masaki swallowed his words of thanks that he was going to give her.
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It seemed to be natural that Masaki who had just awoken still had a low level. She must have been worried about him. Since their relationship wasn't equal anymore, Masaki swallowed his words of thanks that he was going to give her.
   
 
There were still more stairs.
 
There were still more stairs.
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"Nihaha, I guess it was like that...well yeah, it didn't go very well a lot of the time."
 
"Nihaha, I guess it was like that...well yeah, it didn't go very well a lot of the time."
   
"Yeah, since you were clumsy, and maybe it's also because you misunderstood a lot of things most of the time?"
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"Since you were clumsy. Maybe it's because you misunderstood a lot of things most of the time?"
   
 
"Only a little."
 
"Only a little."
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"Hm? Aha, I think so too...thanks Masaki!"
 
"Hm? Aha, I think so too...thanks Masaki!"
   
She shook off the dark atmosphere and gave a bright smile that she had worn since she was an elementary school student.
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She shook off the dark atmosphere and gave a bright smile that she had since she was an elementary school student.
   
 
A high-pitched electronic sound rang.
 
A high-pitched electronic sound rang.
   
The sharp sound that repeatedly assaulted the ears, echoed throughout the wide stair case.
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The sharp sound that repeatedly assaulted the ears, echoed through the wide stairs.
   
 
Shirley lifted up her left hand.
 
Shirley lifted up her left hand.
   
She wore a silver bracelet on her wrist. A relief of a rose was engraved on it and a violet crystal adorned it.
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She had a silver bracelet on her wrist. A relief of a rose was engraved on it and a violet crystal adorned it.
   
 
The sound stopped when she touched it with her right hand while a translucent board appeared in the previously empty space. It wasn't some kind of illusion, it was purely the product of science.
 
The sound stopped when she touched it with her right hand while a translucent board appeared in the previously empty space. It wasn't some kind of illusion, it was purely the product of science.
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"Go. I'll go to the staff room on the 30th floor."
 
"Go. I'll go to the staff room on the 30th floor."
   
It wouldn't take too much time to get there since he was now on the 25th floor.
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It wouldn't take too much time to get there since he was now on the 25th floor.
   
 
"I'm sorry I wasn't able to show you everything!"
 
"I'm sorry I wasn't able to show you everything!"
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"It's alright. After you're done, I'll be happy for you to show me around the other places. Especially the shop where they sell delicious cakes."
 
"It's alright. After you're done, I'll be happy for you to show me around the other places. Especially the shop where they sell delicious cakes."
   
"Of course, you really do like cakes Masaki! See you later!"
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"Of course, you really like cakes Masaki! See you later!"
   
 
Shirley gave a nod then ran off.
 
Shirley gave a nod then ran off.

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