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The park was situated a few minutes' walk past Tsukimori's home. |
The park was situated a few minutes' walk past Tsukimori's home. |
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− | By the time the viridian green fence of the park came into view, my breath was so wild and faint that I expected to |
+ | By the time the viridian green fence of the park came into view, my breath was so wild and faint that I expected to really faint any moment. |
I checked the time on my watch. It was just past eleven, which was reasonable because I had returned home once, taken a shower and put on a change of clothes. |
I checked the time on my watch. It was just past eleven, which was reasonable because I had returned home once, taken a shower and put on a change of clothes. |
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When I whispered so, she turned around with vim and vigor, spinning the skirt-part of her dress like a parasol. The clock hand had long since passed midnight. |
When I whispered so, she turned around with vim and vigor, spinning the skirt-part of her dress like a parasol. The clock hand had long since passed midnight. |
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− | "I'm shocked. How could I have |
+ | "I'm shocked. How could I have miss-timed such an important event?" <!-- mistimed? --> |
Something rare happened: she was discouraged. |
Something rare happened: she was discouraged. |
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