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"Or perhaps you’ve changed your mind?" |
"Or perhaps you’ve changed your mind?" |
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− | Deliberately taking plenty of time |
+ | Deliberately taking plenty of time to wink once more. |
− | + | Still not moving, she gazed at Banri with a perfect smile, almost as if she were flirting with him. |
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− | + | It didn’t feel at all like hostility, though. |
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"No, ...that hasn’t changed." |
"No, ...that hasn’t changed." |
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Out of habit, perhaps, she ran her fingers through her hair again. |
Out of habit, perhaps, she ran her fingers through her hair again. |
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− | From those gestures alone, thoughts like "she may be pretty scary..." had come to mind. |
+ | From those gestures alone, thoughts like "she may be pretty scary..." had come to mind. In the prettily upturned corners of her mouth, in the expression on her face, you couldn’t tell what she was feeling. It wasn’t too warm nor too cold, too dry nor too wet. Like something artificial, something you might suspect incapable of feeling. In front of Banri, with a decidedly overwhelming sense of indifference, that smile shone beautifully. |
− | Under the |
+ | Under the flashing light of those black eyes, thinking how pitiful he was with regards to women, Banri suddenly and unexpectedly thought about what he had been thinking the day before. As it was, standing there and supplely twisting at the waist, with good looks, a smile and fashionable to boot, was she not perfect? He couldn’t see any weaknesses nor faults. He had a feeling nobody else in this world could outshine Kaga Kouko. |
− | Already forgetting just why he wanted to talk to her, |
+ | Already forgetting just why he wanted to talk to her, in which case, please pardon me… as it was, his back clumsy and stiff like a crayfish, and somehow reluctant, |
"Ah, Tada Banri!" |
"Ah, Tada Banri!" |
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He’d been caught off guard. |
He’d been caught off guard. |
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− | "What |
+ | "What what, you went to what new club!? Are you maybe cheating!?" |
"We're drinking again today aren’t we? You’re coming, of course?" |
"We're drinking again today aren’t we? You’re coming, of course?" |