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"Put these on?" |
"Put these on?" |
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− | He tried to take off his socks and hand them over. It would have been good if he'd noticed a little sooner. Her feet were definitely bare. However, |
+ | He tried to take off his socks and hand them over. It would have been good if he'd noticed a little sooner. Her feet were definitely bare. However, but she didn't put them on, nor return them, she gazed at him, in the same pose as when she received them. |
Her messed up hair clinging to her cheeks, she wasn't bothering now to cover things up with a smile, |
Her messed up hair clinging to her cheeks, she wasn't bothering now to cover things up with a smile, |
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"It's my fault that things turned out this way." |
"It's my fault that things turned out this way." |
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− | Looking away from herself again, she looked straight at Banri once more. Being prettily put back in order, indeed with a serious frown, "I'm sorry |
+ | Looking away from herself again, she looked straight at Banri once more. Being prettily put back in order, indeed with a serious frown, "I'm sorry", she repeated once again. Even in this moment, her large eyes were flashing darkly. |
"...That's not right. 'It wasn't Kaga-san's fault', saying such things." |
"...That's not right. 'It wasn't Kaga-san's fault', saying such things." |
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"That's wrong!" |
"That's wrong!" |
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− | "I thought it would be good if Kaga-san could make some friends in that club. Therefore, in spite of the strange feeling they gave me, I stopped worrying about it, |
+ | "I thought it would be good if Kaga-san could make some friends in that club. Therefore, in spite of the strange feeling they gave me, I stopped worrying about it, it's OK, let's go, you're bothering Kaga-san. Therefore, it's my responsibility, of course." |
"That's not right, that's wrong. ...You're just wrong!" |
"That's not right, that's wrong. ...You're just wrong!" |
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Tired of talking after that, her next breath was a like a gasp. Her gaze trembled. |
Tired of talking after that, her next breath was a like a gasp. Her gaze trembled. |
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− | "...Understanding, |
+ | "...Understanding, from this spring arrived until yesterday, that there was only one person who bothered to speak with me. Only Tada-kun. Tada-kun called out to me, though it was news about how Mitsuo being excessively defiant... but, even though I found it hard to understand... you talked to me, ...and I was happy for that. That too is true." |
"If so, then of course trying to call out to you was good." |
"If so, then of course trying to call out to you was good." |
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Banri, because he saw that, today's Kouko, yesterday's Kouko--- the Kouko around Yanagisawa was a different person, he thought. |
Banri, because he saw that, today's Kouko, yesterday's Kouko--- the Kouko around Yanagisawa was a different person, he thought. |
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− | But Yanagisawa, if he had seen the same thing, he probably would have thought the "Now-Kouko" |
+ | But Yanagisawa, if he had seen the same thing, he probably would have thought the "Now-Kouko" different. |
"If so, I think he'd be wrong." |
"If so, I think he'd be wrong." |