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In the quiet of his home, he'd received a text from Kouko. The message, perhaps because of the tension of the morning, maybe due to the hangover, was awfully long. In that place, such a sentence it was. |
In the quiet of his home, he'd received a text from Kouko. The message, perhaps because of the tension of the morning, maybe due to the hangover, was awfully long. In that place, such a sentence it was. |
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− | 'Thinking about things like being rejected, refusing Tada-kun would be |
+ | 'Thinking about things like being rejected, refusing Tada-kun would be much the same thing.' |
Reading it, he did not understand it right away. |
Reading it, he did not understand it right away. |
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"...Whaa..." |
"...Whaa..." |
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− | When he immediately saw his own face in it's proper place in the picture, a smiling class portrait, |
+ | When he immediately saw his own face in it's proper place in the picture, a smiling class portrait, his gasped a little. Third year, class 4, Tada Banri. Tenth in the line. |
He traced his fingertip slowly over his unknown self, and his unknown classmates' faces. He still had a feeling of dread towards what he had felt, but could no longer recall. He suppressed those feelings; he wanted to know who they were. He wanted to become able to. |
He traced his fingertip slowly over his unknown self, and his unknown classmates' faces. He still had a feeling of dread towards what he had felt, but could no longer recall. He suppressed those feelings; he wanted to know who they were. He wanted to become able to. |
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"Huh? What? I can't hear you very well." |
"Huh? What? I can't hear you very well." |
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− | A dying cherry tree by a dry river bed, a big sky. The voices of friends. A long bridge. A strong breeze. Other than Banri, there |
+ | A dying cherry tree by a dry river bed, a big sky. The voices of friends. A long bridge. A strong breeze. Other than Banri, there nobody else on the bridge. |
Only Banri stood there now, alone, standing still amongst the scenery. In the middle of reality, existing. The ramen was boiling, his mother was getting frustrated, in such a moment he existed. |
Only Banri stood there now, alone, standing still amongst the scenery. In the middle of reality, existing. The ramen was boiling, his mother was getting frustrated, in such a moment he existed. |