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What kind of face he should show in Linda's presence, he did not know. |
What kind of face he should show in Linda's presence, he did not know. |
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− | To that extent, her's was the face he thought he wanted to see. She was |
+ | To that extent, her's was the face he thought he wanted to see. She was person he thought he wanted to be with. Somewhere in his heart, he must have been thinking, "I want to go back, I am dying to go back." In only one night, he had suddenly come to be like this. |
A blank expression, or something like it, he simply could not show. That much was a given in any case. |
A blank expression, or something like it, he simply could not show. That much was a given in any case. |
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---A drop of water fell, running from Linda's fingertip to her wrist. |
---A drop of water fell, running from Linda's fingertip to her wrist. |
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− | Having seen that, or rather noticing that he had seen that, he felt ashamed at how his gaze clung to that clear water drop as it went smoothly down her skin. He was unable to take his eyes from it. |
+ | Having seen that, or rather noticing that that he had seen that, he felt ashamed at how his gaze clung to that clear water drop as it went smoothly down her skin. He was unable to take his eyes from it. |
"..." |
"..." |
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"Mmm" |
"Mmm" |
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− | With a jerk of her chin, she told him to drink. Her eyes |
+ | With a jerk of her chin, she told him to drink. Her eyes closely partially like a cat's, she had such a face. Acting like she was older than him. |
Banri looked at it and doing as he was told, as if greedily, bit down on the straw. He finished it without talking nor even thinking, in any case he did what he was supposed to. Completely engrossed, he sucked up the cold drink and gulped it down, eyes closed, as if clinging to every sensation as it passed by. |
Banri looked at it and doing as he was told, as if greedily, bit down on the straw. He finished it without talking nor even thinking, in any case he did what he was supposed to. Completely engrossed, he sucked up the cold drink and gulped it down, eyes closed, as if clinging to every sensation as it passed by. |