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==Golden Time 5: Chapter 1==
 
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Banri had cast Linda... one whom held only great regrets for the me that had to be placed into this world, away entirely. She had superficial human contact with him, but she was shut out from the depths of his heart. Even though I had always been at her side, seeing her there, making sure she was happy, and if something happened, I would come running at once. ...No matter what, Linda cannot see me, neither can she hear me, even though I want her to.
 
Banri had cast Linda... one whom held only great regrets for the me that had to be placed into this world, away entirely. She had superficial human contact with him, but she was shut out from the depths of his heart. Even though I had always been at her side, seeing her there, making sure she was happy, and if something happened, I would come running at once. ...No matter what, Linda cannot see me, neither can she hear me, even though I want her to.
   
I used to think that we shared the human "existence" called Tada Banri. Even unseen by eyes, and my voice not getting through, I had felt that Banri more or less respected the lives that went before.
 
 
But in the end, that guy, obviously from his own ego, without thinking even for a moment about my feelings, without so much as looking back, broke something that was important to me from the very bottom of my heart. And then he threw me away. He denied my existence. He rejected me, not accepting me.
 
 
The matter in question, me, this me who is no longer a person but just a spirit, was truly hurt. Even though there was nothing left of my "body" to be injured.
 
 
I only lived for eighteen years. That was all the time I had.
 
 
I was willing to devote all the time I had to Linda. Though short, the days I lived I had so that I could love Linda and be with her. Those days really sparkled, so when they came to nothing without reason, I was able to convince myself that the feelings, even if they hadn't borne fruit, had plenty of meaning still...
 
 
Linda would continue a long, long, long time after this, with a wonderful life, so it was okay that my existence was only faint, so long as I exist. If that be the case, that is my life, I said to myself.
 
 
And yet in spite of all that, Banri made it come to nothing.
 
 
Banri murdered me.
 
 
Even if inside of Linda only existed fragments of me, I was denied being, cast out and trampled underfoot. To where I was scattered and blown away to the edge of the world, as if worth nothing.
 
 
Isn't natural for me to bitter over such as this?
 
 
However, this body has no physical powers, like to knock down people from behind, to summon poltergeists, to sob or to scream. Both hands waving emptily through the air, the carefree Banri eats just yakisoba every single day. Boom! There goes the one o'clock boiled egg, and now for this guy over here, boom! a record breaking yakisoba coming up. Sauce, salty, pork, seafood... day after day with a clever rotation so he doesn't get bored... Be ye fat!
 
 
Once you get chunky fat like the pork you eat, Kaga Kouko will dump you no matter what!
 
 
Even trying to curse him with wounds, fatigue and desperation, his nineteen year old body was burning calories just fine. Was that it, was it my "gluttony" curse that made it a little spicier, so he exclaimed, "Eh!? Today's yakisoba turned out really good! How!? Yum!" Was it? It was just the other day...
 
 
Looking at the face of Banri in this way, now, under the sun, flushed by the excitement and the heat, I, by myself, feel anew the urge to curse him.
 
 
I'm going to become an avenging ghost for sure.
 
 
Directing all of what little remains of this spirit at it, I will curse Banri's summer. I will absolutely curse it. I will see it cursed.
 
 
Because I will cling to you like a shadow, harrassing you in many ways. Will I allow you to enjoy your fun summer any more? Sticking to you like a sweat soaked yukata, I will whisper my curses hotly in those ears of yours.
 
 
'This is the highest point... this is the peak: your summer is over now. It will be downhill from here, just meaningless things... boredom, nothing to do, idle days. Unable to do anything well, only troubles, bits and pieces of bad luck, one after another. Lonely, sad, unable to do anything about it, overwhelmingly empty, absolutely alone... that is the kind of summer you shall live. See ya, Tada Banri...'
 
 
At any rate, so begged your spirit. The body, well, it was dragged along.
 
 
In order to make the curse sink into him, I synchronized my movements with Banri's. Raising my hands as if they were his, stepping out together, even if I can't quite get in the mood... ''Hmm hoihoi! He~y!'' Even for spirits, in time of dancing you dance. Then imagining letting out a scream so loud it would give me a stroke, ''I pray! Make me an avenging spirit! Curse him! Tada Banri! Be over with, this summer! Let it end, still boring! Be submerged, soaked entirely in lonely isolation! Summer is THE BOSS! I am an Avenging Spirit! Here are SCREAMS! And after that EVEN MORE!''
 
 
And, the visitors by the road, while watching my face shouting "Go for it!" urged me on with their fans. What the? ...What, what the?
 
 
A strange thought passed through my mind. Of the people dancing here now, of the people watching the dancers, I wondered, how many of them are "real, living humans"?
 
   
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