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As for Linda, rather than being in the line of dancers like Banri and Kaga Kouko, she was always out front, right behind the paper lantern that marked the start of their team. Right in the middle of all the noise and clamor, she was especially dazzling.
 
As for Linda, rather than being in the line of dancers like Banri and Kaga Kouko, she was always out front, right behind the paper lantern that marked the start of their team. Right in the middle of all the noise and clamor, she was especially dazzling.
   
I wonder, where the heck did Linda learn how to dance? Though she certainly has had amazingly developed reflexes from the start, as far as I know, she probably hasn't received any special training in dance.
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I wonder, where the heck Linda did learn how to dance? Though she certainly has had amazingly developed reflexes from the start, as far as I know, she probably hasn't received any special training in dance.
   
 
But even so, Linda's dancing was really terrific.
 
But even so, Linda's dancing was really terrific.

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