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That man was almost certainly guilty.
 
That man was almost certainly guilty.
   
She was aware he often made gaffes, but rather than shut his loose lips, he had thoughtlessly and arrogantly decided to hide his problem behind a war between nobles. He was truly a terrible example for his people.
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He was aware he often made gaffes, but rather than shut his loose lips, he had thoughtlessly and arrogantly decided to hide his problem behind a war between nobles. He was truly a terrible example for his people.
   
 
And with that in mind, the young lady moved her lips as a trail of tense sweat ran down her cheek.
 
And with that in mind, the young lady moved her lips as a trail of tense sweat ran down her cheek.

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