Editing HEAVY OBJECT:Volume1 Chapter 1

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“Not only are there no tanks or fighters, but there aren’t even any armored vehicles or soldier transport vehicles. The few vehicles scattered about all look like tractors for plowing the snow.”
 
“Not only are there no tanks or fighters, but there aren’t even any armored vehicles or soldier transport vehicles. The few vehicles scattered about all look like tractors for plowing the snow.”
   
“I guess they made everything either for Object maintenance or radar in order to cut down on unneeded maintenance costs for the inspecting of the other vehicles.”
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“I guess they made everything either for Object maintenance or radar in order to cut down on unneeded maintenance costs for the inspecting the other vehicles.”
   
 
“It’s true that spending taxes on maintaining outdated tanks seems pretty ridiculous…”
 
“It’s true that spending taxes on maintaining outdated tanks seems pretty ridiculous…”
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“? …It looks like the roof and walls can open.”
 
“? …It looks like the roof and walls can open.”
   
“Well, their only means of fighting is the Object. It’d be a major problem if they were attacked while it was being serviced. I’m betting they made sure some of the cannons can still function while it’s undergoing maintenance so they can intercept any attack.”
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“Well, their only means of fighting is the Object. It’d be a major problem if they were attacked while it was being serviced. I’m betting they make sure some of the cannons can still function while it’s undergoing maintenance so they can intercept any attack.”
   
 
“But if the Object is still running, how can they service it?”
 
“But if the Object is still running, how can they service it?”
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Quenser looked back at the base zone as a whole while listening to Heivia.
 
Quenser looked back at the base zone as a whole while listening to Heivia.
   
“…So what should we blow up?” Quenser asked his comrades in arms while thinking about the structure of the various buildings. “What would cause them the most problems if it was destroyed?”
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“…So what should we blow up?” Quenser asked his comrades in arms while thinking on the structure of the various buildings. “What would cause them the most problems if it was destroyed?”
   
 
“You already know, don’t you? The legs. There has to be a storage area or something that holds the spare parts for the Water Strider’s legs.”
 
“You already know, don’t you? The legs. There has to be a storage area or something that holds the spare parts for the Water Strider’s legs.”

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