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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
A girl known as an Elite, who was nicknamed 'the princess' (whether she liked it or not) by her own army and troops, was inside a giant naval port style of maintenance base zone.
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A girl known as an Elite, who was nicknamed the princess (whether she liked it or not) by her own army and troops, was inside a giant naval port style of maintenance base zone.
   
 
The facility to maintain the Object she piloted had to be quite large to accommodate its over 50 meter size. If the ancient Greek designers who had built the Greek temples had seen the giant structure, they would likely have been utterly shocked. The princess’s Object, Baby Magnum, fit snugly inside the structure.
 
The facility to maintain the Object she piloted had to be quite large to accommodate its over 50 meter size. If the ancient Greek designers who had built the Greek temples had seen the giant structure, they would likely have been utterly shocked. The princess’s Object, Baby Magnum, fit snugly inside the structure.
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“Shit!!”
 
“Shit!!”
   
Quenser dove down below the surface without having time to check if his mask was working properly.
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Quenser doze down below the surface without having time to check if his mask was working properly.
   
 
The Tri-Core’s thick floats passed by above, barely missing him. The intense wind greatly disturbed the surface of the water, but that great fury did not reach Quenser below the surface.
 
The Tri-Core’s thick floats passed by above, barely missing him. The intense wind greatly disturbed the surface of the water, but that great fury did not reach Quenser below the surface.

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