Editing HEAVY OBJECT:Volume3 Chapter 2

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With the sound of compressed air being expelled, the giant mass of steel jumped about 150 meters into the air.
 
With the sound of compressed air being expelled, the giant mass of steel jumped about 150 meters into the air.
   
What Heivia felt first in that instant was an intense blast of wind. A portion of the compressed air expelled at the Object’s feet as it jumped across the gap between cliffs and reached them. Heivia then grimaced as he felt an intense pain like his ear drums were about to burst. It was not just the strength of the wind. He felt like the air pressure itself had greatly changed.
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What Heivia felt first in that instant was an intense blast of wind. A portion of the compressed air expelled at the Object’s feet as it jumped crossed the gap between cliffs and reached them. Heivia then grimaced as he felt an intense pain like his ear drums were about to burst. It was not just the strength of the wind. He felt like the air pressure itself had greatly changed.
   
 
And…
 
And…
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With his mouth hanging open, Heivia removed his head from the missile’s targeting device and simply stared blankly up at the sight. He looked like an outfielder following the path of a ball flying so high it would clearly be a home run.
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With his mouth hanging open, Heivia removed his head form the missile’s targeting device and simply stared blankly up at the sight. He looked like an outfielder following the path of a ball flying so high it would clearly be a home run.
   
 
The 200,000 ton mass flew through a large arc.
 
The 200,000 ton mass flew through a large arc.

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