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Quenser was still supporting Charlotte. He was also still carrying her assault rifle.
 
Quenser was still supporting Charlotte. He was also still carrying her assault rifle.
   
"It would be better to head up rather than waste time in these labyrinthine tunnels.”
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It would be better to head up rather than waste time in these labyrinthine tunnels.”
   
 
“Will we head to Point 1 aboveground?”
 
“Will we head to Point 1 aboveground?”
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She seemed to truly detest that “Oh ho ho”.
 
She seemed to truly detest that “Oh ho ho”.
   
It was unbelievable that she was continuing to make small movements to evade the Wing Balancer’s weapons' fire.
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It was unbelievable that she was continuing to make small movements to evade the Wing Balancer’s weapons fire.
   
 
“I’d love to help out, but I don’t have enough information,” said Quenser. “Have you figured out any characteristics of the Object while fighting it? Like what areas its movements suggest it is more carefully protecting or something like that.”
 
“I’d love to help out, but I don’t have enough information,” said Quenser. “Have you figured out any characteristics of the Object while fighting it? Like what areas its movements suggest it is more carefully protecting or something like that.”
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The Wing Balancer showed no mercy.
 
The Wing Balancer showed no mercy.
   
As soon as it lined up its sights, it fired.
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As soon it lined up its sights, it fired.
   
 
“Quenser!!”
 
“Quenser!!”
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He then aimed the assault rifle straight up without bothering to close the cover.
 
He then aimed the assault rifle straight up without bothering to close the cover.
   
(…Those lenses!! It uses infrared!!)
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(…those lenses!! It uses infrared!!)
   
 
He moved his finger.
 
He moved his finger.
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“Get out of the way!!” needlessly shouted the princess.
 
“Get out of the way!!” needlessly shouted the princess.
   
Quenser had already started moving to the side as quickly as he could.
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Quenser was already started moving to the side as quickly as he could.
   
 
Immediately afterwards, a great crater was created on the Kamchatka Peninsula.
 
Immediately afterwards, a great crater was created on the Kamchatka Peninsula.
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“Ask them to surrender.”
 
“Ask them to surrender.”
   
“First, I will fire from the side and destroy the Wing Balancer’s main cannon.”
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“First, I will fire form the side and destroy the Wing Balancer’s main cannon.”
   
 
With a great roar, the Faith Organization’s last hope of resistance was suppressed. The shockwave sent Quenser rolling once more.
 
With a great roar, the Faith Organization’s last hope of resistance was suppressed. The shockwave sent Quenser rolling once more.
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They were clear grains.
 
They were clear grains.
   
They were the ores commonly referred to as diamonds.
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They were the ore commonly referred to as diamonds.
   
 
“…You.”
 
“…You.”

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