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What Heivia was saying was perfectly natural for anyone of that day and age. It was the people who felt nothing when suggesting they stand before those monstrous weapons that had something wrong with them.
 
What Heivia was saying was perfectly natural for anyone of that day and age. It was the people who felt nothing when suggesting they stand before those monstrous weapons that had something wrong with them.
   
Quenser understood that.
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Quenser understand that.
   
 
However…
 
However…
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She drew him in close and some anger filled her smile.
 
She drew him in close and some anger filled her smile.
   
“We view wealth and economics as above all else, so we hate it when people make a mockery of money. Our fee is a sincere reward given in exchange for the work we perform. The mere thought that we would lower it in a time of crisis out of a sense of charity or justice is an insult. You are essentially saying the value of our lives can change based on your own convenience.”
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“We view wealth and economics as above all else, so we hate it when people make a mockery of money. Our fee is a sincere reward given in exchange for the work we perform. The mere thought that we would lower it in a time of crisis out a sense of charity or justice is an insult. You are essentially saying the value of our lives can change based on your own convenience.”
   
 
“I never said that,” replied Quenser as he stuck a hand into the pants pocket of his military uniform.
 
“I never said that,” replied Quenser as he stuck a hand into the pants pocket of his military uniform.
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They were still working to save everyone in the city.
 
They were still working to save everyone in the city.
   
“We are about to engage the 24th Mobile Maintenance Battalion. Our objective is to defend the immigrant residential city! And it isn’t just us. The Baby Magnum will be running before long. So don’t you dare die until we blow away that bastard Prizewell City Slicker.”
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“We are about to engage the 24th Mobile Maintenance Battalion. Our objective is to defend the immigrant residential city! And isn’t just us. The Baby Magnum will be running before long. So don’t you dare die until we blow away that bastard Prizewell City Slicker.”
   
 
The battle was about to begin.
 
The battle was about to begin.
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The shockwave blasted the gas away from the area.
 
The shockwave blasted the gas away from the area.
   
In the next instant, the 6 dummy models fired their low-stability plasma cannons. They fired them at the point 50 meters up where the special gas was the most concentrated.
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In the next instant, the 6 dummy models fired their low-stability plasma cannons. They fired them at the point 50 meters up where the special gas was most concentrated.
   
 
A flash of light burned into Quenser’s eyes and a great noise stabbed into his brain.
 
A flash of light burned into Quenser’s eyes and a great noise stabbed into his brain.
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“Okay! I’ll just pray I’m not blown to pieces by some misbehaving cannon!!”
 
“Okay! I’ll just pray I’m not blown to pieces by some misbehaving cannon!!”
   
At the same time, Quenser spotted a torn metal plate lying on the ground. It was a fragment of armor torn off of the dummy model when it had been hit by the rocket. It was about 30 cm square and 12 cm thick. It was heavy, but not so heavy that he could not pick it up with both hands.
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At the same time, Quenser spotted a torn metal plate lying on the ground. It was a fragment of armor torn off of the dummy model when it had been hit by the rocket. It was about 30 cm square and 12 cm thick. It was heavy, but not so heavy he could not pick it up with both hands.
   
(This is surprisingly light. This isn’t just not up to the standards of an Object. Even regular steel would be denser than this.)
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(This is surprisingly light. This isn’t just not up the standards of an Object. Even regular steel would be denser than this.)
   
 
He looked closer and noticed that the actual steel plate was only about 5 cm thick. The rest was made up of some pale gray substance. The edge where it had broken off looked more like crumbled stone than metal.
 
He looked closer and noticed that the actual steel plate was only about 5 cm thick. The rest was made up of some pale gray substance. The edge where it had broken off looked more like crumbled stone than metal.
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“Understood. And don’t think you’re safe either!! Don’t do anything that will let them know where you are!!”
 
“Understood. And don’t think you’re safe either!! Don’t do anything that will let them know where you are!!”
   
Urged on by Heivia, Quenser started running while carrying the fragment. The thick snow, the damage he had taken, and the fragment of armor all lowered his speed. A dull pain ran through his elbow. Again and again, he heard whisperings in his heart telling him to throw away that piece of junk.
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Urged on by Heivia, Quenser started running while carrying the fragment. The thick snow, the damage he had taken, and the fragment of armor all lowered his speed. A dull pain ran through his elbow. Again and again, he heard whispering in his heart telling him to throw away that piece of junk.
   
 
But he ignored it and continued moving his legs.
 
But he ignored it and continued moving his legs.

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