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The Faith Organization controlled society with religious faith.
 
The Faith Organization controlled society with religious faith.
   
The conflict between these new collective organizations that appeared upon the collapse of the UN showed absolutely no sign of ending. It was unclear if this was due to no one knowing how to bring it to an end or if there were those who did not wish for it to end.
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The conflict between these new collective organizations that appeared upon the collapse of the UN showed absolutely no sign of ending. It was unclear if this was due to no one knowing how to bring it to and end or if there were those who did not wish for it to end.
   
 
Now…
 
Now…
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The surrounding men frantically adjusted their aim.
 
The surrounding men frantically adjusted their aim.
   
The leader narrowed his eyes and asked Quenser and Heivia, “What do you think are you doing?”
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The leader narrowed his eyes and asked Quenser and Heivia, “What do you think you are doing?”
   
 
“If I detonate this, you are the ones who will be blown away. And yes, I have made sure that the fragments and the blast will not touch us inside the container.”
 
“If I detonate this, you are the ones who will be blown away. And yes, I have made sure that the fragments and the blast will not touch us inside the container.”
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Thanks to the tremendous squall, there were few bugs, but the chill of early morning disappeared as time went on. All that was left was the horrid heat of a bath with a broken ventilation fan.
 
Thanks to the tremendous squall, there were few bugs, but the chill of early morning disappeared as time went on. All that was left was the horrid heat of a bath with a broken ventilation fan.
   
As expected, the Capitalist Corporations soldiers were not performing their guard duties with much enthusiasm. Footprints might be washed away, but the tire tracks of trucks did not disappear so quickly. However, they saw very few of those.
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As expected, the Capitalist Corporations soldiers were not performing their guard duties with much enthusiasm. Footprints might wash away, but the tire tracks of trucks did not disappear so quickly. However, they saw very few of those.
   
 
“Everything is soaking wet. Who knows what areas could crumble under our feet.”
 
“Everything is soaking wet. Who knows what areas could crumble under our feet.”
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“(You should probably stop that. Valkyrie is basically the enforcer of public morals in the Faith Organization. I get the feeling they wouldn’t appreciate jokes like that.)”
 
“(You should probably stop that. Valkyrie is basically the enforcer of public morals in the Faith Organization. I get the feeling they wouldn’t appreciate jokes like that.)”
   
“(That depends on their specific religious sect. If they worship a god of fertility or a mother goddess, they can be rather proactive about sleeping around a lot. The stories about the Greek Dionysus are pretty amazing.)”
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“(That depends on their specific religious sect. If they worship of a god of fertility or a mother goddess, they can be rather proactive about sleeping around a lot. The stories about the Greek Dionysus are pretty amazing.)”
   
 
“(…So they’re police rather than soldiers, hm?)”
 
“(…So they’re police rather than soldiers, hm?)”

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