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Sarasa knocked the first aid kit to the ground and searched further into the forest.
 
Sarasa knocked the first aid kit to the ground and searched further into the forest.
   
However, she spotted something else unpleasant 5 meters in.
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However, she spotted something else unpleasant not 5 meters in.
   
 
It was a trap using wires.
 
It was a trap using wires.
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“A woman’s grudge is a scary thing. If only they weren’t so bewitchingly beautiful.”
 
“A woman’s grudge is a scary thing. If only they weren’t so bewitchingly beautiful.”
   
After that sidetrack with a Faith Organization opponent that had not been stated on any concrete information, the two boys got back to their actual mission.
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After that sidetrack with a Faith Organization opponent that had not been started on any concrete information, the two boys got back to their actual mission.
   
 
After walking for a bit longer and crossing a small mountain, they spotted their objective.
 
After walking for a bit longer and crossing a small mountain, they spotted their objective.
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“God, these Capitalist Corporations rations are good…”
 
“God, these Capitalist Corporations rations are good…”
   
“When the hell did you make a class change to a gourmet character? And quit eating them all! Leave some for me!!”
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“When the hell did you make a class change to a gourmet character? And quite eating them all! Leave some for me!!”
   
 
This lasted for about two days.
 
This lasted for about two days.
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Would they continue watching or would they act?
 
Would they continue watching or would they act?
   
The snipers of the armed group gave it careful thought. It would be simple enough to decide that Quenser and Heivia had chickened out, but firing that close to the maintenance base zone could easily bring danger to the snipers. And if they killed Quenser and Heivia, the Deep Optical would remain. The efforts of the “volunteer” children used to create the needed situation would all be for naught.
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The snipers of the armed group gave it careful thought. It would be simple enough to decide Quenser and Heivia had chickened out, but firing that close to the maintenance base zone could easily bring danger to the snipers. And if they killed Quenser and Heivia, the Deep Optical would remain. The efforts of the “volunteer” children used to create the needed situation would all be for naught.
   
 
(Just a warning should be enough.)
 
(Just a warning should be enough.)
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“Wait a second. Stop. Yes, you two over there.”
 
“Wait a second. Stop. Yes, you two over there.”
   
When they arrived at the gate, an amplified voice called out from over 100 meters ahead. A giant light near the gate shined on them and an off-road vehicle equipped with a machine gun approached.
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When they arrived at the gate, an amplified voice called out from over 100 meters ahead. A giant light neat the gate shined on them and an off-road vehicle equipped with a machine gun approached.
   
 
Two soldiers got out of the vehicle as it idled.
 
Two soldiers got out of the vehicle as it idled.
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“We can’t hang around forever with nothing but the diet drinks. Also, that old man is in the room we thought we could find the armbands in. Without green or blue armbands, we can’t approach the Deep Optical’s maintenance building. If we can’t do that, getting in the base was meaningless.”
 
“We can’t hang around forever with nothing but the diet drinks. Also, that old man is in the room we thought we could find the armbands in. Without green or blue armbands, we can’t approach the Deep Optical’s maintenance building. If we can’t do that, getting in the base was meaningless.”
   
It was possible they could find the armbands they needed in other rooms, but they had no information to base it on. Searching over a hundred rooms would take time and it would seem suspicious. More importantly, they would be unable to avoid a fight if they accidentally opened the door of a soldier who was on break.
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It was possible they could find the armbands they needed in other rooms, but they no information to base it on. Searching over a hundred rooms would take time and it would seem suspicious. More importantly, they would be unable to avoid a fight if they accidentally opened the door of a soldier who was on break.
   
 
If that happened, they would never survive.
 
If that happened, they would never survive.
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As he pressed his back against the storage building’s wall, drops of liquid that were clearly not from the squall appeared all over Heivia’s body.
 
As he pressed his back against the storage building’s wall, drops of liquid that were clearly not from the squall appeared all over Heivia’s body.
   
“Damn, they’ve caught on!! The entire area’s lit up brighter than midday!!”
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“Damn, they’ve caught on!!The entire area’s lit up brighter than midday!!”
   
 
“Just as expected. When the diet drinks failed to show up and the soldiers delivering them completely disappeared, anyone would realize something was up. Once they checked the contents of the bottles, they would know for sure.”
 
“Just as expected. When the diet drinks failed to show up and the soldiers delivering them completely disappeared, anyone would realize something was up. Once they checked the contents of the bottles, they would know for sure.”
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It all came to an end in no time at all.
 
It all came to an end in no time at all.
   
The wooden building Quenser and Heivia informed the princess of over the radio was the only one left completely unscathed by the Baby Magnum. That was where the children were kept. Everything else was blown to pieces.
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The wooden building Quenser and Heivia informed the princess of over the radio was the only one left completed unscathed by the Baby Magnum. That was where the children were kept. Everything else was blown to pieces.
   
 
The Baby Magnum did not even need to appear directly on the battlefield.
 
The Baby Magnum did not even need to appear directly on the battlefield.

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