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It had been designed primarily to provide that sight at night rather than with practicality in mind, so the bridges were built quite close together. When they were all lit up, people often mistook the seven separate bridges for one large bridge.
 
It had been designed primarily to provide that sight at night rather than with practicality in mind, so the bridges were built quite close together. When they were all lit up, people often mistook the seven separate bridges for one large bridge.
   
It was a well-known spot for people to gather if the international sports competition was not enough for them, but there were a surprising number of people there for so late at night when almost everyone stayed in a hotel. This was due to some tabloid-style information websites publishing strange data about how it was the perfect spot for a couple to naturally begin an embrace.
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It was a well-known spot for people to gather if the international sports competition was not enough for them, but there were a surprising number of people there for so late at night when most everyone stayed in a hotel. This was due to some tabloid-style information websites publishing strange data about how it was the perfect spot for a couple to naturally begin an embrace.
   
 
A woman was leaning on the handrail of the walking area on the Bifröst Arch.
 
A woman was leaning on the handrail of the walking area on the Bifröst Arch.
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“If it had been an attack against her, I would understand. But she took action to help an Information Alliance athlete.”
 
“If it had been an attack against her, I would understand. But she took action to help an Information Alliance athlete.”
   
“I doubt you could ever get her to admit that. But it was an incident that will probably make her autograph more valuable.”
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“I doubt you could ever get her to admit that. But it was in incident that will probably make her autograph more valuable.”
   
 
“The type that empathizes with others is dangerous. If she goes easy on an opponent after hearing their situation, her actions could negatively affect all of us supporting her.”
 
“The type that empathizes with others is dangerous. If she goes easy on an opponent after hearing their situation, her actions could negatively affect all of us supporting her.”
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There were 5 to 10 of them.
 
There were 5 to 10 of them.
   
These were different from the thumb-sized autocannon shells from before. They were metal tubes as big as fire extinguishers. Mariydi recognized them, so she let go of the oxygen tank and covered her ears with both hands.
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These were different form the thumb-sized autocannon shells from before. They were metal tubes as big as fire extinguishers. Mariydi recognized them, so she let go of the oxygen tank and covered her ears with both hands.
   
 
An explosion occurred immediately afterwards.
 
An explosion occurred immediately afterwards.

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