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While sipping on a chilled carbonated beverage, she thought of what had started all this.
 
While sipping on a chilled carbonated beverage, she thought of what had started all this.
   
When the Object designer named Claire had first heard what was happening from the Night Edge Platoon (that was actually Unicorn in disguise), she had of course thought of the possibility it was a trap. After all, putting on that kind of act was Unicorn’s specialty.
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When the Object designer named Claire had first heard what was happening from the Night Edge Platoon (that was actually Unicorn in disguise), she had of course thought of the possibility it was trap. After all, putting on that kind of act was Unicorn’s specialty.
   
 
Prince Dimiksy was meticulously preparing a plan to assassinate Princess Staivia.
 
Prince Dimiksy was meticulously preparing a plan to assassinate Princess Staivia.
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The man from the Night Edge Platoon muttered that last comment under his breath, but he likely intentionally let her read his lips.
 
The man from the Night Edge Platoon muttered that last comment under his breath, but he likely intentionally let her read his lips.
   
He likely had the ability she spoke of as well, so she could not have him be jealous of her. For one thing, his ability for direct killing and trickery were likely greater than her own.
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He likely had the ability she spoke of us well, so she could not have him be jealous of her. For one thing, his ability for direct killing and trickery were likely greater than her own.
   
 
And so the woman wearing a lab coat over a swimsuit continued speaking.
 
And so the woman wearing a lab coat over a swimsuit continued speaking.
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That was the opinion of someone who had succeeded in creating something from scratch.
 
That was the opinion of someone who had succeeded in creating something from scratch.
   
She was overwhelmingly correct and overwhelmingly cold.
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She was overwhelmingly correct and overwhelming cold.
   
 
If you put enough effort into it, you will succeed. She did not mean that as a shallow platitude. She had truly achieved that, so she could not understand the anguish of those currently struggling through it. Why can’t you succeed even though you’re putting so much effort into this? How long will you be stuck back at that stage? Are you even trying? She was the kind of person who could innocently ask those much too cruel questions.
 
If you put enough effort into it, you will succeed. She did not mean that as a shallow platitude. She had truly achieved that, so she could not understand the anguish of those currently struggling through it. Why can’t you succeed even though you’re putting so much effort into this? How long will you be stuck back at that stage? Are you even trying? She was the kind of person who could innocently ask those much too cruel questions.

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