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As the sound of those firing exploded overhead, Quenser covered his mouth with one hand.
 
As the sound of those firing exploded overhead, Quenser covered his mouth with one hand.
   
“Why do people like to root for the underdog? Where did my hatred for them go?”
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“Why do people like to root for the underdog? Where has my hatred for them go?”
   
 
“I think you’re actually looking down on them with a sense of superiority. But don’t worry. You’re enjoying your life well enough.”
 
“I think you’re actually looking down on them with a sense of superiority. But don’t worry. You’re enjoying your life well enough.”
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Quenser and Heivia laid face down on the slope of the sand dune while the sounds of destruction continued.
 
Quenser and Heivia laid face down on the slope of the sand dune while the sounds of destruction continued.
   
The handmade armored trucks had been relatively well modified, but they were filled with holes, their gasoline tanks and weaponry ignited, and they violently exploded. The intense destruction of the machineguns rained down evenly on the group of infantry who had tried to corner Quenser and the others. There were no screams. Instead, a dark red sauce was splattered across the giant frying pan of the desert.
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Even if the handmade armored trucks had been relatively well modified, they were not perfect. So when they were filled with holes, their gasoline tanks and weaponry ignited, and they violently exploded. The intense destruction of the machine guns rained down evenly on the group of infantry who had tried to corner Quenser and the others. There were no screams. Instead, a dark red sauce was splattered across the giant frying pan of the desert.
   
 
Quenser entered a philosophic mood.
 
Quenser entered a philosophic mood.
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Quenser used his uniform’s sleeve to wipe sweat from his brow and looked up at the roasting sun that felt like the end of the world.
 
Quenser used his uniform’s sleeve to wipe sweat from his brow and looked up at the roasting sun that felt like the end of the world.
   
“What do we do now? I don’t want to sit around here. We would dry up before they finished.”
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“What do we do now? I don’t want to sit around here. We will dry up before they finish.”
   
 
“There’s a pipeline over there. It’s rusted and falling apart, but we can rest behind it. The humidity should be lower and it’ll block the sun.”
 
“There’s a pipeline over there. It’s rusted and falling apart, but we can rest behind it. The humidity should be lower and it’ll block the sun.”
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“Yuck! It feels like I’m drinking my own sweat!!”
 
“Yuck! It feels like I’m drinking my own sweat!!”
   
“Use your head, student. You need to cool the water bottle with the icing spray used for machineguns. Medic!!”
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“Use your head, student. You need to cool the water bottle with the icing spray used for machine guns. Medic!!”
   
 
Heivia’s joking shout let Quenser know the danger had truly passed.
 
Heivia’s joking shout let Quenser know the danger had truly passed.
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“This abandoned pipeline network stretches across the entire desert. No water or oil is being sent through it, so it’s a safe empty space. You don’t mean…”
 
“This abandoned pipeline network stretches across the entire desert. No water or oil is being sent through it, so it’s a safe empty space. You don’t mean…”
   
“When the military government ruled Oceania, secret funds, weapons, and drugs travelled across the country like ghosts were transporting them. They slipped right past the military checkpoints and satellite surveillance. It was said they did it by bribing or threatening the local soldiers, but this might be it.”
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“When the military government ruled Oceania, secret funds, weapons, and drugs traveled across the country like ghosts were transporting them. They slipped right past the military checkpoints and satellite surveillance. It was said they did it by bribing or threatening the local soldiers, but this might be it.”
   
“A secret tunnel? So as easily as heading underground through a manhole, they could freely move across Oceania without being checked?”
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“A secret tunnel? So as easily as heading underground through a manhole, they can freely move across Oceania without being checked?”
   
 
It was not the pump facility or the giant underground structure that mattered.
 
It was not the pump facility or the giant underground structure that mattered.
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“Seriously? You really set foot in that poisonous swamp?”
 
“Seriously? You really set foot in that poisonous swamp?”
   
“And in exchange, I found some interesting data. It looks less like official data and more like someone at the bottom gathered some data to figure out what he was involved in.”
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“And in exchange, I have found some interesting data. It looks less like official data and more like someone at the bottom gathered some data to figure out what he was involved in.”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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“The people running things from the shadows? We still don’t know if this is really a conspiracy.”
 
“The people running things from the shadows? We still don’t know if this is really a conspiracy.”
   
“If we dig up the names and identities of this week’s MVPs here, we might find a connection. They disguised their trucks as the Blue Cross and loaded them with machineguns and missiles to hide the secret passageway through the pipeline. They’re definitely up to no good.”
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“If we dig up the names and identities of this week’s MVPs here, we may find a connection. They have disguised their trucks as the Blue Cross and have loaded them with machine guns and missiles to hide the secret passageway through the pipeline. They’re definitely up to no good.”
   
 
The mischievous infantryman shrugged in utter exhaustion.
 
The mischievous infantryman shrugged in utter exhaustion.
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He sprayed it across his water bottle and spoke.
 
He sprayed it across his water bottle and spoke.
   
“Knowing the account numbers is a start. How about we leak the entire list onto the internet while making it look like they were hacked? With secret tax haven accounts, trust matters most. If information has been taken straight from the servers, the clients and managers will both panic.”
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“Knowing the account numbers is a start. How about we leak the entire list onto the internet while making it look like they are hacked? With secret tax haven accounts, trust matters most. If information has been taken straight from the servers, the clients and managers will both panic.”
   
 
“Yes, but will that accomplish anything other than causing a commotion?”
 
“Yes, but will that accomplish anything other than causing a commotion?”
   
“We can quickly open a fake website claiming to check whether your account number was stolen. If we add in some spyware to snatch the IP of anyone entering their number, we should be able to determine who entered what number. And the shadier the person, the sooner they’ll respond.”
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“We can quickly open a fake website claiming to check whether your account number was stolen. If we add in some spyware to snatch the IP of anyone entering their number, we shall be able to determine who entered what number. And the shadier the person, the sooner they’ll respond.”
   
 
In that instant, everyone resting in the shade of the pipeline stared silently at Quenser.
 
In that instant, everyone resting in the shade of the pipeline stared silently at Quenser.
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“It sounds like the insecticide used for roaches. It’s made to look like delicious food so they’ll take it back to their nest where it kills all of them.”
 
“It sounds like the insecticide used for roaches. It’s made to look like delicious food so they’ll take it back to their nest where it kills all of them.”
   
A male soldier had been curled up and fiddling with a handheld device, but he now made an OK sign with his hand.
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A male soldier was curled up while fiddling with a handheld device, but then he made an OK sign with his hand.
   
 
The others peered curiously at the small screen.
 
The others peered curiously at the small screen.
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“Their impressions of what?”
 
“Their impressions of what?”
   
“No matter how much they’re being paid, I doubt they would say something that strays too far from their ideologies and beliefs. The money is nothing but the trigger giving them the final push. In that case, what do these people believe in?”
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“No matter how much they’re being paid, I doubt they will say something that strays too far from their ideologies and beliefs. The money is nothing but the trigger giving them the final push. In that case, what do these people believe in?”
   
 
Heivia grimaced when he heard that.
 
Heivia grimaced when he heard that.
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“This pipeline is being used as a secret transportation network and massive amounts of money are being given to influential people to manipulate the opinions of the Oceanian people. What are they trying to do here?”
 
“This pipeline is being used as a secret transportation network and massive amounts of money are being given to influential people to manipulate the opinions of the Oceanian people. What are they trying to do here?”
   
“Hey,” spoke up the soldiers who had helped them earlier. “I checked a few more of their handheld devices and there’s a net storage site they access frequently. They may keep their larger data there.”
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“Hey,” spoke up the soldiers who had helped them earlier. “I checked a few more of their handheld devices and there’s a net storage site they access frequently. They might have kept their larger data there.”
   
 
“Does it have a password?”
 
“Does it have a password?”
   
“Just like online banks, it uses a one-time password. …But this was outsourced and the company in charge of security has slipped past the firewall a few times. We might be able to use the maintenance master key.”
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“Just like online banks, it uses a one-time password. …But this is outsourced and the company in charge of security has slipped past the firewall a few times. We may be able to use the maintenance master key.”
   
“Would they really use the same key for several weeks or months?”
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“Will they really use the same key for several weeks or months?”
   
“No, but if we find a pattern to the changes in the periodically updated alphanumeric key, it might be possible to determine what the current key is. It will take some time, though.”
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“No, but if we find a pattern to the changes in the periodically updated alphanumeric key, it may be possible to determine what the current key is. It will take some time, though.”
   
 
“Try working on it,” said Quenser as his radio emitted an electronic tone.
 
“Try working on it,” said Quenser as his radio emitted an electronic tone.
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A lot of sand had poured in, so it looked a lot more cluttered than the pump facility.
 
A lot of sand had poured in, so it looked a lot more cluttered than the pump facility.
   
The piles of wooden boxes may have added to that impression.
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The piles of wooden boxes might have added to that impression.
   
“It looks like they’ve finished investigating here. Otherwise, we never would have been allowed in.”
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“It looks like they’ve finished investigating here. Otherwise, we will never have been allowed in.”
   
 
“What are these boxes? Surely they aren’t empty.”
 
“What are these boxes? Surely they aren’t empty.”
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===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===
   
In the name of war recovery, many different types of construction had begun at a fevered pitch across Oceania: houses, shops, roads, water and sewage, etc. The coalition of the four world powers claimed bringing order to the country was their top priority, but they could not utterly eliminate anyone who was even slightly suspicious. Specialists who did not look right in a suit or work uniform and guards who carried guns could not be distinguished from actual bad guys.
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In the name of war recovery, many different types of construction had begun at a fevered pitch across Oceania: houses, shops, roads, water and sewage, etc. The coalition of the four world powers claimed that bringing order to the country was their top priority, but they could not utterly eliminate anyone who was even slightly suspicious. Specialists who did not look right in a suit or work uniform and guards who carried guns could not be distinguished from actual bad guys.
   
If those suspicious-looking people were let into the same space as rich foreign tourists, it could lead to a situation similar to a hamster that mistook another hamster’s sex.
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If those suspicious-looking people were allowed into the same space as rich foreign tourists, it could lead to a situation similar to a hamster that mistook another hamster’s sex.
   
 
To keep some separation, a hidden side to the city was created for those suspicious-looking people. Drawn by the flow of money, violent restaurants, marriage scam artists who were always crying in a bar, and people from various other occupations would gather there. These were the people who had gone too far in their original country. Like a snowball rolling down a snowy mountain, the strength of these dark cities slowly but steadily grew.
 
To keep some separation, a hidden side to the city was created for those suspicious-looking people. Drawn by the flow of money, violent restaurants, marriage scam artists who were always crying in a bar, and people from various other occupations would gather there. These were the people who had gone too far in their original country. Like a snowball rolling down a snowy mountain, the strength of these dark cities slowly but steadily grew.
   
A certain bar in one such place was quite cheap but it was best not to think about what corners were cut to make it that cheap. In a dimly lit corner of that bar, a small group sat around a table cut off from the rest of the bar by curtains.
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A certain bar in one such place was quite cheap but it was best not to think about what corners were cut to make it that cheap. In a dimly lit corner of that bar, a small group sat around a table which was cut off from the rest of the bar by curtains.
   
 
“They have failed.”
 
“They have failed.”
   
A young man wore a black suit and hat that looked out of place in the summertime desert. His sunglasses looked more like they were hiding his face than protecting his eyes from the sun.
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The young man wore a black suit and hat that looked out of place in the summertime desert. His sunglasses looked more like they were hiding his face than protecting his eyes from the sun.
   
“Terminal 52 has been taken by the Legitimacy Kingdom. The men we hired were wiped out.”
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“Terminal 52 has been taken by the Legitimacy Kingdom. The men we hired have been wiped out.”
   
“We knew they would lose from the beginning.”
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“We have already known that they would lose from the beginning.”
   
 
He was not the only one in such a conspicuous outfit.
 
He was not the only one in such a conspicuous outfit.
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A woman sitting at the same table wore all black, down to her necktie.
 
A woman sitting at the same table wore all black, down to her necktie.
   
“Even if they could temporarily drive them back, they are a world power and thus they have an Object. If the problem grew too large, they would have sent it in. Those men were doomed to lose.”
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“Even if they can temporarily drive them back, they are a world power and thus they have an Object. If the problem grows too large, they will have sent it in. Those men have been doomed to lose.”
   
 
But it was not just the two of them. Everyone at the table was wearing all black.
 
But it was not just the two of them. Everyone at the table was wearing all black.
   
“Their loss was planned for. We all understand that. In that case, could you tell us one thing? Did they die before or after achieving their goal?”
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“Their loss has been planned for. We all understand that. In that case, can you tell us one thing? Have they died before or after achieving their goal?”
   
 
“If not, I would be a little more concerned.”
 
“If not, I would be a little more concerned.”
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It was as if it were a ritual that had begun long before that young man.
 
It was as if it were a ritual that had begun long before that young man.
   
“Fortunately, Case #022’s objective was fulfilled. A link with the scene has been secured. As planned, we shall continue to the next situation.”
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“Fortunately, Case #022’s objective has been fulfilled. A link with the scene has also been secured. As planned, we shall continue to the next situation.”
   
 
“In other words?”
 
“In other words?”
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“What’s the matter, Quenser?”
 
“What’s the matter, Quenser?”
   
A 1.5 meter cylindrical container similar to a propane tank lay before them. However, it was made of transparent reinforced glass and it was filled with some kind of liquid. The center of the cylinder had a donut-like hollow area which was filled with an explosive.
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A 1.5 meter cylindrical container similar to a propane tank laid before them. However, it was made of transparent reinforced glass and it was filled with some kind of liquid. The center of the cylinder had a donut-like hollow area which was filled with an explosive.
   
 
“That’s an acid bomb. Militaries use it to destroy evidence!! When the explosive detonates, it destroys the container and the blast sends a thorough shower of powerful acid in every direction. In just a few seconds, it reacts with the air and a vaporized acid cloud expands out. It’ll swallow up five hundred to eight hundred meters in no time! If you get caught in that, you’ll end up in a photograph at an exhibit on the horrors of war!!”
 
“That’s an acid bomb. Militaries use it to destroy evidence!! When the explosive detonates, it destroys the container and the blast sends a thorough shower of powerful acid in every direction. In just a few seconds, it reacts with the air and a vaporized acid cloud expands out. It’ll swallow up five hundred to eight hundred meters in no time! If you get caught in that, you’ll end up in a photograph at an exhibit on the horrors of war!!”
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“But it’s just a bomb, right? Can’t you defuse it!? Bombs are your specialty!”
 
“But it’s just a bomb, right? Can’t you defuse it!? Bombs are your specialty!”
   
“There’s no time. There’s only ten minutes left! It’s waiting for a passcode in case it was accidentally activated, but that isn’t enough time to analyze it!! If you want to live, start running! We need to get back to the helicopters!!”
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“There’s no time. There’s only ten minutes left! It’s waiting for a passcode in case it is accidentally activated, but there isn’t enough time to analyze it!! If you want to live, start running! We need to get back to the helicopters!!”
   
 
Quenser and Heivia did not hesitate to flee the underground structure and they made sure to bring the investigation team and their guards with them.
 
Quenser and Heivia did not hesitate to flee the underground structure and they made sure to bring the investigation team and their guards with them.
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“That’s the acid cloud,” said Heivia as his face paled.
 
“That’s the acid cloud,” said Heivia as his face paled.
   
The giant cloud burst up from the underground structure like cotton candy. It exited the hole from the collapse and spread out across the desert. At the same time, it was likely entering the pump facility through the stairway leading up. That death had no gaps. Everyone would be wiped out.
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The giant cloud burst up from the underground structure like cotton candy. It exited the hole from the collapse and spreaded out across the desert. At the same time, it was likely entering the pump facility through the stairway leading up. That death had no gaps. Everyone would be wiped out.
   
 
“That thing spreads faster than a forest fire. Sixty kph was it!? It’ll overtake us if we try to escape on foot!!”
 
“That thing spreads faster than a forest fire. Sixty kph was it!? It’ll overtake us if we try to escape on foot!!”
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“I get it! I get it, goddammit!!”
 
“I get it! I get it, goddammit!!”
   
The pipe was rusty and falling apart. Cracks and large holes existed in places.
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The pipe was rusty and falling apart. Cracks and large holes existed in many places.
   
 
Quenser and the others ran inside that empty and sandy tube as quickly as they could.
 
Quenser and the others ran inside that empty and sandy tube as quickly as they could.
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“We just have to make it a few hundred meters. That isn’t a marathon. We can escape to safety if we run as quickly as we can!!”
 
“We just have to make it a few hundred meters. That isn’t a marathon. We can escape to safety if we run as quickly as we can!!”
   
“Damn them, whoever they are! What do they want to hide so badly that they’re willing to ruin the environment like this!?”
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“Damn them, whoever they are! What are they hiding so badly that they’re willing to ruin the environment like this!?”
   
 
“We can think about it after we survive!!”
 
“We can think about it after we survive!!”
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“Ah? Eh?”
 
“Ah? Eh?”
   
“We survived! We don’t need to run any further. Do you want to destroy your own heart!?”
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“We have survived! We don’t need to run any further. Or do you want to destroy your own heart?!
   
 
It took him a while to truly realize he had survived.
 
It took him a while to truly realize he had survived.
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Another young man looked down at a blonde woman with a bullet hole in her forehead.
 
Another young man looked down at a blonde woman with a bullet hole in her forehead.
   
“Case #023 complete. The objective was not achieved and it has been deemed a failure. To recover, Case #024 will now begin.”
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“Case #023 complete. The objective has not been achieved and has been deemed a failure. To recover, Case #024 will now begin.”
   
 
===Part 7===
 
===Part 7===
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Quenser worked hard to calm down Heivia who was seriously planning to punch the pilot of the slowly descending helicopter. Surprisingly, the intellectual-looking investigation team seemed to agree with Heivia. They were only human and anyone would be angry when their supposed comrades unreasonably abandoned them in an acid cloud.
 
Quenser worked hard to calm down Heivia who was seriously planning to punch the pilot of the slowly descending helicopter. Surprisingly, the intellectual-looking investigation team seemed to agree with Heivia. They were only human and anyone would be angry when their supposed comrades unreasonably abandoned them in an acid cloud.
   
“Calm down. If we all flip them off, they might fly away without us. We need to give them a smile with the kindness of a younger sister and the dependability of an older sister.”
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“Calm down. If we all flip them off, they may fly away without us. We need to give them a smile with the kindness of a younger sister and the dependability of an older sister.”
   
 
“Got it, Quenser. You’re saying we act like a carnivorous plant, right? Once they open the helicopter door, their life is over.”
 
“Got it, Quenser. You’re saying we act like a carnivorous plant, right? Once they open the helicopter door, their life is over.”
   
The helicopter team must have felt bad because, when they opened the door, they handed out bottles of carbonated drinks they had found somewhere. The bottles were ice cold thanks to the icing spray for machineguns. There were some enticements one’s senses could not resist. After running around in the 50 degree desert, this was more than enough to quiet them down.
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The helicopter team must have felt bad because, when they opened the door, they handed out bottles of carbonated drinks they had found somewhere. The bottles were ice cold thanks to the icing spray for machine guns. There were some enticements one’s senses could not resist. After running around in the 50 degree desert, this was more than enough to quiet them down.
   
 
The middle-aged male pilot explained the situation.
 
The middle-aged male pilot explained the situation.
   
“The acid cloud is spreading out higher in the sky like a cumulonimbus cloud. We checked the weather map for the wind and there is a danger of running into it on our way back to the maintenance base. We want more accurate information if possible.”
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“The acid cloud is spreading out higher in the sky like a cumulonimbus cloud. We have checked the weather map for the wind and there is a danger of running into it on our way back to the maintenance base. We want more accurate information if possible.”
   
“If that’s the only reason you picked us up, I really will shove you out.”
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“If that’s the only reason you pick us up, I really will shove you out.”
   
 
Growing stubborn was not going to accomplish anything.
 
Growing stubborn was not going to accomplish anything.
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“Wait, wait, wait. This contractor, this one, and this one are all major construction companies doing a lot of work toward Oceania’s recovery. Does this mean they’re all helping out this group or being unwittingly used by them?”
 
“Wait, wait, wait. This contractor, this one, and this one are all major construction companies doing a lot of work toward Oceania’s recovery. Does this mean they’re all helping out this group or being unwittingly used by them?”
   
“Well, even the large contractors are using local people to pave roads and lay pipes. To promote employment, they’re actively seeking Oceanian personnel. These shady thugs could probably slip in there.”
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“Well, even the large contractors are using local people to pave roads and lay pipes. To promote employment, they’re actively seeking Oceanian personnel. These shady thugs can probably slip in there.”
   
 
“No matter what plans those at the top make, the project will be delayed if the people at the bottom secretly don’t do their job.”
 
“No matter what plans those at the top make, the project will be delayed if the people at the bottom secretly don’t do their job.”
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“We’re stationed here in Oceania in the name of preserving order, so they’re trying to guide international opinion to believe our presence is causing frequent riots that hurt or kill innocent people.”
 
“We’re stationed here in Oceania in the name of preserving order, so they’re trying to guide international opinion to believe our presence is causing frequent riots that hurt or kill innocent people.”
   
“Then they can do whatever they want. Our higher ups are only spending the military budget on this because the image of a savior hero is useful in politics and diplomacy. Once it isn’t worth it anymore, the military might really leave.”
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“Then they can do whatever they want. Our higher ups are only spending the military budget on this because the image of a savior hero is useful in politics and diplomacy. Once it isn’t worth it anymore, the military may really leave.”
   
 
“And then a new oppressive dictatorship will begin. This group will be able to hide behind a puppet leader.”
 
“And then a new oppressive dictatorship will begin. This group will be able to hide behind a puppet leader.”
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'''“How to freely rearrange the national structure in the name of creating a modern justice system.”
 
'''“How to freely rearrange the national structure in the name of creating a modern justice system.”
   
“The Oceanian military nation had the country working on a completely flawed rulebook. Giving the country proper laws will definitely be necessary.”
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“The Oceanian military nation has made the country work on a completely flawed rulebook. Giving the country proper laws will definitely be necessary.”
   
 
“But when you remake the country’s rules from the ground up, it’s a lot easier for black-hearted people to work in loopholes than if they have to rearrange the system bit by bit.”
 
“But when you remake the country’s rules from the ground up, it’s a lot easier for black-hearted people to work in loopholes than if they have to rearrange the system bit by bit.”
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Quenser and the others read the document while discussing its contents, but a fundamental question caused Quenser to frown.
 
Quenser and the others read the document while discussing its contents, but a fundamental question caused Quenser to frown.
   
“But what are they going to do with this new dictatorship? The Oceanian military nation did something similar, but they were stopped by the combined attack of the coalition force. No matter how many conspiracies they weave together, they’ll be broken up as soon as the coalition notices them.”
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“But what are they going to do with this new dictatorship? The Oceanian military nation has done something similar, but they have been stopped by the combined attack of the coalition force. No matter how many conspiracies they weave together, they’ll be broken up as soon as the coalition notices them.”
   
“The military nation is a great example of that. I doubt any conspirator would want to meet the same fate as the leader there.”
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“The military nation is a great example of that. I doubt any conspirator will want to meet the same fate as the leader there.”
   
“And the people here have to be the same. No one is going to think a riot can push back a fifty meter Object. Even a child would know that. Riots are meant to push with great numbers. If their front lines would be mowed down the instant they gathered, no one would gather.”
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“And the people here have to be the same. No one is going to think a riot can push back a fifty meter Object. Even a child knows that. Riots are meant to push with great numbers. If their front lines are mowed down the instant they gather, no one will gather.”
   
“They need some kind of symbol of rebellion. But what possible symbol would people think could defeat more than twenty Objects?”
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“They need some kind of symbol of rebellion. But what possible symbol will people think that can defeat more than twenty Objects?”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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They were 50+ meter masses of overwhelming military might.
 
They were 50+ meter masses of overwhelming military might.
   
“Were they using the pipelines spread out across Oceania’s desert to slowly gather the parts for an Object!?”
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“Are they using the pipelines that are spreading out across Oceania’s desert to slowly gather the parts for an Object!?”
   
 
===Part 8===
 
===Part 8===
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But they could barely stand to wait even that long.
 
But they could barely stand to wait even that long.
   
“We don’t actually know when the Oceanian military government’s 0.5 generation Object was built. If it was built by smuggling the parts through this network of pipes and this group took over all that, it’s perfectly realistic to think they’ve completed an Object!!”
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“We don’t actually know when the Oceanian military government’s 0.5 generation Object was built. If it has been built by smuggling the parts through this network of pipes and this group has taken over all that, it’s perfectly realistic to think they’ve completed an Object!!”
   
 
“Quit analyzing and report this, Quenser! Damn, I bet our huge-breasted commander is still mad. I just hope she’s willing to listen!!”
 
“Quit analyzing and report this, Quenser! Damn, I bet our huge-breasted commander is still mad. I just hope she’s willing to listen!!”
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“Really? We have to deal with this? I don’t see how this could lead to anything good.”
 
“Really? We have to deal with this? I don’t see how this could lead to anything good.”
   
“I hear you have stubbornly survived the acid bomb and thus approached quite close to the truth. Even so, it is too late to do anything about it.”
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“I hear you have stubbornly survived the acid bomb and thus have approached quite close to the truth. Even so, it is too late to do anything about it.”
   
“We at least know you were involved behind the scenes of the military nation and their 0.5 generation Object.
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“Well.. At least we know you are involved behind the scenes of the military nation and their 0.5 generation Object.
   
 
“Yes. They never had the money and technology needed to construct an Object on their own. As you probably know, that was built based on a downgraded version of the design data for an Information Alliance model known as the Gatling 033...no, I suppose you refer to it by the codename of Rush.”
 
“Yes. They never had the money and technology needed to construct an Object on their own. As you probably know, that was built based on a downgraded version of the design data for an Information Alliance model known as the Gatling 033...no, I suppose you refer to it by the codename of Rush.”
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Quenser frowned and recalled the “oh ho ho” laughter of that Information Alliance pilot Elite.
 
Quenser frowned and recalled the “oh ho ho” laughter of that Information Alliance pilot Elite.
   
“But why did all of you so innocently believe that they had only constructed that one? If they can build one, they can build two. With the pipeline spread out across the entire desert and the one hundred terminal facilities connected to it, anything is possible. Our project had begun years and years before the fall of the military nation, so how many Objects do you think we have stocked up in that ant’s nest?”
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“But why do all of you so innocently believe that they have only constructed that one? If they can build one, they can build two. With the pipeline spreading out across the entire desert and the one hundred terminal facilities connecting to it, anything is possible. Our project has begun years and years before the fall of the military nation, so how many Objects do you think we have stocked up in that ant’s nest?”
   
 
He used the plural.
 
He used the plural.
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“Are you saying your goal is to remake Oceania into a second ‘world police’!?”
 
“Are you saying your goal is to remake Oceania into a second ‘world police’!?”
   
“Is there any better way to recover from a war? If we succeed, we will put an end to the ‘clean wars’ spreading throughout the world. We will combine the different world powers into a single world power. And Oceania will rule at the center of it all. This continent was overrun with unreasonable war and then crushed by the different world powers afterwards, so it is the perfect symbol for the new world police.”
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“Is there any better way to recover from a war? If we succeed, we will put an end to the ‘clean wars’ spreading throughout the world. We will combine the different world powers into a single world power. And Oceania will rule at the center of it all. This continent has been overrun with unreasonable war and has been crushed by the different world powers afterwards, so it is the perfect symbol for the new world police.”
   
“This is ridiculous,” spat out Heivia. “All the dark history from the creation of the Oceanian military nation was your doing, wasn’t it!? The new world police? An era truly without war? A world created by people as heartless as you would be a horrible place! You just want to create a world where you can kill as many people as you want!!”
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“This is ridiculous,” spat out Heivia. “All the dark history from the creation of the Oceanian military nation has been your doing, isn’t it!? The new world police? An era truly without war? A world created by people as heartless as you will be a horrible place! You just want to create a world where you can kill as many people as you want!!”
   
 
“I have only one thing to say to that: are you aware that history is something created by someone and recorded by someone?”
 
“I have only one thing to say to that: are you aware that history is something created by someone and recorded by someone?”
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He was used to being accused of doing horrible things.
 
He was used to being accused of doing horrible things.
   
“And no matter how much of a commotion you cause, you can no longer change the current course of events. Look at the city below you. The angry cries of the crowd should reach you up in the sky. Do you know what that rumbling noise is? Those are the footsteps of the rioters marching through the streets. Can you pacify all of those people?”
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“And no matter how much of a commotion you cause, you can no longer change the current course of events. Look at the city below you. The angry cries of the crowd shall reach you up in the sky. Do you know what that rumbling noise is? Those are the footsteps of the rioters marching through the streets. Can you pacify all of those people?”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Like a fad or a trend, something unseen was influencing people’s lives.
 
Like a fad or a trend, something unseen was influencing people’s lives.
   
Normally, only the advertising firms that created commercials were aware of that current, but it now created an obvious wall before Quenser and the others.
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Normally, only the advertising firms that created commercials were aware of that current, but it was now being created into an obvious wall before Quenser and the others.
   
 
“What is this commotion?” asked Quenser as he stared blankly down at the city from the sliding door.
 
“What is this commotion?” asked Quenser as he stared blankly down at the city from the sliding door.
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The view count had already reached ten million. It was on a site used worldwide, but the video was a bit choppy as if it was having difficulty loading.
 
The view count had already reached ten million. It was on a site used worldwide, but the video was a bit choppy as if it was having difficulty loading.
   
“The news is nothing but entertainment. They complain about the depressing incidents, but that does not stop people from searching for them. TV and newspapers used to have a lot of influence, but nowadays one will never learn anything without searching for themselves. And that gives people a certain enthusiasm.”
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“The news is nothing but entertainment. They complain about the depressing incidents, but that does not stop people from searching for them. TV and newspapers are being used to have a lot of influence, but nowadays one will never learn anything without searching for themselves. And that gives people a certain enthusiasm.”
   
 
The incidents and battles that were supposedly resolved were now being used for something else.
 
The incidents and battles that were supposedly resolved were now being used for something else.
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The video showed a few minutes of a large-scale clash between Objects in the desert night which had all been meant to kill a single soldier.
 
The video showed a few minutes of a large-scale clash between Objects in the desert night which had all been meant to kill a single soldier.
   
“Thank you. We put together many different plans and you ruined a few of them, but you provided us with an even greater tool,” said the voice. “Truth Theater. That is the name of the video. When you take something formless, give it a name, and place it within a frame of your choosing, it provides a certain impression. That is the basic method of influencing people’s impressions. After that, you only need to provide them with a specific direction. For example, you can create a flag that they take as their own symbol without anyone forcing them. They will then spread the word of their existence around the world. The trick is to skillfully mix in the proper ideals and desires. The night sky flag is pure indigo, so it can easily be made by throwing a can of paint on a curtain. If you create a complex and cool-looking symbol, no one can create it for themselves. This is an application of influencing people’s impressions.”
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“Thank you. We put together many different plans and you ruined a few of them, but you have provided us with an even greater tool,” said the voice. “Truth Theater. That is the name of the video. When you take something formless, give it a name, and place it within a frame of your choosing, it provides a certain impression. That is the basic method of influencing people’s impressions. After that, you only need to provide them with a specific direction. For example, you can create a flag that they take as their own symbol without anyone forcing them. They will then spread the word of their existence around the world. The trick is to skillfully mix in the proper ideals and desires. The night sky flag is pure indigo, so it can easily be made by throwing a can of paint on a curtain. If you create a complex and cool-looking symbol, no one can create it for themselves. This is an application of influencing people’s impressions.”
   
 
There were no lies in the materials they had used.
 
There were no lies in the materials they had used.
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However, the timing of the editing was extremely malicious. By showing only a few minutes in the video, it only showed the beginning of the problem and the growth of the chaos it produced. There were likely people watching it who did not even know these problems had been resolved.
 
However, the timing of the editing was extremely malicious. By showing only a few minutes in the video, it only showed the beginning of the problem and the growth of the chaos it produced. There were likely people watching it who did not even know these problems had been resolved.
   
“The stage has already been set. If it had not, I would not have so calmly contacted you. The indigo flag of the night sky could cover the entire continent at any time. When faced with this overwhelming maelstrom of people, both military and civilian, the military officials who are obsessed with clean wars will hesitate. That time lag will prevent you from ever catching up. Farewell. You have lost. Once only our victory remains, the world will greatly benefit and rejoice in its newfound peace.”
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“The stage has already been set. If it has not, I will not have so calmly contacted you. The indigo flag of the night sky can cover the entire continent at any time. When faced with this overwhelming maelstrom of people, both military and civilian, the military officials who are obsessed with clean wars will hesitate. That time lag will prevent you from ever catching up. Farewell. You have lost. Once only our victory remains, the world will greatly benefit and rejoice in its newfound peace.”
   
 
“Tell me your name.”
 
“Tell me your name.”
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The pilot’s reply was tense.
 
The pilot’s reply was tense.
   
“We were attacked from the surface! It was probably a cheap mortar.”
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“We have been attacked from the surface! It is probably a cheap mortar.”
   
 
“A mortar!? Those are used to fire shells farther than a grenade can be thrown. How are they using it for an anti-air attack!?”
 
“A mortar!? Those are used to fire shells farther than a grenade can be thrown. How are they using it for an anti-air attack!?”
   
“I don’t know, but one just hit us! They forcibly used it beyond its intended use. Unlike a missile, it isn’t guided, so they won’t be able to reliably hit us!!”
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“I don’t know, but one just hit us! They have forcibly used it beyond its intended use. Unlike a missile, it isn’t guided, so they won’t be able to reliably hit us!!”
   
 
“This is the hatred of the people,” said the young man on the radio. “Those shells cost twenty dollars each. There is a reason they have long been a best seller in this world of never-ending wars.”
 
“This is the hatred of the people,” said the young man on the radio. “Those shells cost twenty dollars each. There is a reason they have long been a best seller in this world of never-ending wars.”
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The young man spoke from the radio as if to provide the finishing blow.
 
The young man spoke from the radio as if to provide the finishing blow.
   
“Ha ha ha. Soldiers surrounded by a bloodthirsty mob. A tragedy like this might work as another symbol to drive out the coalition.”
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“Ha ha ha. Soldiers surrounded by a bloodthirsty mob. A tragedy like this may work as another symbol to drive out the coalition.”
   
 
“Is this it!?”
 
“Is this it!?”
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“Hey, which way are we pointed!? I hope it’s somewhere without any people!”
 
“Hey, which way are we pointed!? I hope it’s somewhere without any people!”
   
“It is! We’re headed for a trash dump. The trash is piled up in hills and my sensors aren’t picking up anyone!!”
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“It is! We’re headed to a trash dump. The trash is piled up in hills and my sensors aren’t picking up anyone!!”
   
 
“Good.”
 
“Good.”

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