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Ryouhei then placed both hands onto the back of his head.
 
Ryouhei then placed both hands onto the back of his head.
 
 
“There are actually times when Kyouya’s sixth sense is wrong.”
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“There is actually times when Kyouya’s sixth sense is wrong.”
 
 
 
“There’s nothing that can be done, this type of thing has always been based mostly on luck.”
 
“There’s nothing that can be done, this type of thing has always been based mostly on luck.”
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…There is an 80% chance that Kuzuha stopped him outside. Ah, why?
 
…There is an 80% chance that Kuzuha stopped him outside. Ah, why?
 
 
Oh well. Although I am curious about the results of a direct confrontation, but I should temporarily save this kind of fun. Once he thought about it up to this point, Kyouya could not help but laugh.
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Oh well. Although I am curious about the results after a direct confrontation, but I should temporarily save this kind of fun. Once he thought about it up to this point, Kyouya cannot help but laugh.
 
 
 
“Anyways there are plenty of opportunities in the future, there is no need to hurry.”
 
“Anyways there are plenty of opportunities in the future, there is no need to hurry.”
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Minami chipped in.
 
Minami chipped in.
 
 
“I think he must be very aware of his own strengths, he really is a powerful enemy.”
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“I think he must very aware of his own strengths, he really is a powerful enemy.”
 
 
 
“How strange, you would actually praise others—”
 
“How strange, you would actually praise others—”
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After thinking for a while, he decided to ask Minami directly to understand the situation.
 
After thinking for a while, he decided to ask Minami directly to understand the situation.
 
 
“Minami, why are the buttons in front of your chest opened?”
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“Minami, why is the buttons in front of your chest opened?”
 
 
 
“…?...That’s true.”
 
“…?...That’s true.”
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The perplexed Minami looked to her chest and was about to fasten the buttons when her hands suddenly stopped in midair.
 
The perplexed Minami looked to her chest and was about to fasten the buttons when her hands suddenly stopped in midair.
 
 
There was no other reason, Minami had already discovered the abnormality in front of her chest.
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There was no other reason, Minami has already discovered the abnormality in front of her chest.
 
 
 
“…Gone.”
 
“…Gone.”
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“What happened…Minami?”
 
“What happened…Minami?”
 
 
Haruka immediately found the answer. As they were both females, Haruka instantly noticed Minami’s abnormality, but she just could not believe it in that moment. After all, things shouldn't just disappear without the owner being aware of it.
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Haruka immediately found the answer. As they were both females, Haruka instantly noticed the Minami’s abnormality, but she just could not believe it in that moment. After all, it isn’t during the moment, where the owner is unknown to the situation, for things to disappear.
 
 
 
“Could it be…”
 
“Could it be…”
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“—!”
 
“—!”
 
 
Her face suddenly became pale.
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Her faced suddenly became pale.
 
 
 
“I…It…can’t be…!”
 
“I…It…can’t be…!”
 
 
Her pale face suddenly flushed. She bit tightly on her lower lip, and embarrassedly brushed her thighs, her expression very shy.
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Her pale face suddenly flushed. She bit tightly on her lower lips, and embarrassedly brushed her thighs, her expression was very shy.
 
 
Afterwards, she began to care about the length of her skirt, and ultimately could not resist—
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Afterwards, she began to care about the length of her skirt, and ultimately could resist—
 
 
 
“S…Sorryy, I’ll excuse myself.”
 
“S…Sorryy, I’ll excuse myself.”
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Haruka gently stepped back a few steps, and left the student council office in panic.
 
Haruka gently stepped back a few steps, and left the student council office in panic.
 
 
The momentum of opening the heavy doors was surprising, but the momentum of closing doors was even more astonishing.
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The momentum of opening the heavy doors was surprising, but the momentum of closing door was even more astonishing.
 
 
 
The sound of the doors opening and closing constantly echoed in the classroom.
 
The sound of the doors opening and closing constantly echoed in the classroom.
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Facing the dismissive Ryouhei, Kyouya, who knew the truth, could only shake his head with a wry smile.
 
Facing the dismissive Ryouhei, Kyouya, who knew the truth, could only shake his head with a wry smile.
 
 
The transparent space over the horizon. The elevator, with a quiet motor driven sound, was slowly going down. The elevator gently went down towards its destination floor, like a giant steel bar dropping down. During the short stay in the elevator, Akatsuki and Kuzuha chatted.
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The transparent space over the horizon. The elevator, with a quiet motor driven sound, is slowly going down. The elevator gently went down heading towards its destination floor, seemed like a giant steel bar dropping down. During the short stay at the elevator, Akatsuki and Kuzuha chatted.
 
 
 
“—So you skipped grades, very impressive.”
 
“—So you skipped grades, very impressive.”
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When facing Akatsuki’s praises, Kuzuha still had no expression.
 
When facing Akatsuki’s praises, Kuzuha still had no expression.
 
 
“I just turned 11, which is equivalent to an elementary 6th grader.
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“I just turned 11, which is equivalent to an elementary 6th grader.
 
 
 
But the 11 years old Kuzuha was the same as Akatsuki, they were both students in the high school sector. Babel school originally had the so-called grade skipping system, but her example of grade skipping was a rare case.
 
But the 11 years old Kuzuha was the same as Akatsuki, they were both students in the high school sector. Babel school originally had the so-called grade skipping system, but her example of grade skipping was a rare case.
 
 
Babel school was not a place where you are only seeking knowledge. Besides the static lessons, combat training was also included in their daily curriculum. Thus it could be said that not only had Kuzuha’s intelligence been confirmed, her combat capability was also not inferior to the students older than her by 5 years.
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Babel school is not a place where you are only seeking knowledge, besides the static lessons, combat training is also included in their daily curriculum. This could be said that not only has Kuzuha’s intelligence been confirmed, her combat capability was not inferior to the students older than her by 5 years.
 
 
 
“The class rep is certainly outstanding.”
 
“The class rep is certainly outstanding.”
 
 
“That’s hard to say. However, the student council members you were going to challenge before are much more amazing than me.”
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“That’s hard to say. However, the student council members you were going to challenge before is much more amazing than me.”
 
 
“I believe that’s true, after all, the student council member are JPN Babel School’s top youths.
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“I believe that’s true, after all, the student council member are JPN Babel School’s top youths.
 
 
Akatsuki muttered. Then the words following that from Kuzuha left Akatsuki dumbfounded.
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Akatsuki muttered. Then the words following that came from Kuzuha left Akatsuki dumbfounded.
 
 
 
“It’s not that simple. The student council president Hikami Kyouya is part of <COCOON>.”
 
“It’s not that simple. The student council president Hikami Kyouya is part of <COCOON>.”
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“—”
 
“—”
 
 
Akatsuki was slightly startled, almost suspecting if he had heard wrong.
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Akatsuki’s was slightly startled, almost suspecting if he has heard wrong.
 
 
After she noticed Akatsuki’s unusual look, Kuzuha frowned and looked a little surprised.
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After noticed an unusual Akatsuki, Kuzuha frowned and looked a little surprised.
 
 
 
“…Are you okay?”
 
“…Are you okay?”
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Akatsuki looked down at Kuzuha, only to see her expressionlessly say:
 
Akatsuki looked down at Kuzuha, only to see her expressionlessly say:
 
 
“Your face … is a little bit scary.”
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“You face … is a little bit scary.”
 
 
 
“…Sorry. I didn’t think he was actually part of <COCOON>…Hahaha, so that’s it.”
 
“…Sorry. I didn’t think he was actually part of <COCOON>…Hahaha, so that’s it.”
 
 
Akatsuki finally understood why, on the day of the entrance inspection, he could feel a strong pressure coming from him.
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Akatsuki finally understand why on the day of the entrance inspect, why he could feel a strong pressure coming from him.
 
 
— The new United Nation’s chairman, secretary general and G7’s Babel school highest authority, all of them were returnees who had obtained a strong power from an alternative world. These people were the so-called <COCOON>.
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— The new United Nation’s chairman, secretary general and G7’s Babel school highest authority, all of them are returnees who obtained a strong power from alternative world. These people are the so-called <COCOON>.
 
 
Children of Cross Over Other Nation, in short <COCOON>. These people are all returnees who have achieved a title of a hero in an alternative world. If you have to use the shortest description, they are the strongest warriors, and at the same time, they represent the entire world. Akatsuki originally thought that Kyouya was only the strongest student in JPN Babel school, but now it looked like he should be the strongest Japanese instead. No wonder that during the entrance inspection, the staff on the scene were all respectful to him. Akatsuki suddenly realized that.
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Children of Cross Over Other Nation, in short <COCOON>. These people are all returnees who have achieved a title of a hero in alternative world. If you have to use the shortest description, they are the strongest warriors, at the same time, they represent the entire world. Akatsuki originally thought that Kyouya was only the strongest student in JPN Babel school, now it looks like he should be the strongest Japanese instead. No wonder during the entrance inspection, all the staff on the scene were all respectful to him, Akatsuki suddenly realized that.
 
 
 
Just a single <COCOON> is enough to override the power of a national military. In order to implement the concept of world peace, they, as the elite of Babel, took up the responsibility to educate and manage the returnees. If a war occurs somewhere in the world, Babel will immediately intervene by sending the alternative returnees to the battlefield.
 
Just a single <COCOON> is enough to override the power of a national military. In order to implement the concept of world peace, they, as the elite of Babel, took up the responsibility to educate and manage the returnees. If a war occurs somewhere in the world, Babel will immediately intervene by sending the alternative returnees to the battlefield.
 
 
On the surface, Babel seems to have young men and women who have various superpowers, developing them into an elite force to safeguard world peace and promote human prosperity. Conversely, they are turning the alternative world returnees into a tool for war, in order to suppress the organizations worldwide.
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On the surface, Babel seems to have young men and women who have various superpowers, developing them into a elite force to safeguard world peace and promote human prosperity. Contrarily, they are turning the alternative world returnees as a tool for war, in order to suppress the organizations worldwide.
 
 
 
<COCOON>’s existence, would it really bring everlasting peace and prosperity? The answer is a no.
 
<COCOON>’s existence, would it really bring everlasting peace and prosperity? The answer is a no.
 
 
There was a group of people who deemed the alternative world returnees to be infidels. Terrorist acts that used cruel methods to persecute the faith and ideologies still remains in this world<!-- This sentence is unclear, "persecute the faith" is weird. -->. Even as Akatsuki and Kuzuha were going down in the elevator currently, there were many young returnees being sent off to the battlefield.
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There is a group of people who deemed the alternative world returnees as infidels, terrorist acts that uses cruel methods to persecute the faith and ideologies still remains in this world. Even as Akatsuki and Kuzuha are going down in the elevator currently, there are many young returnees being sent off to the battlefield.
 
 
The countless battlefields around the world did not have Babel’s defense barrier, so returnee causalities naturally occurred.
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The countless battlefields around the world did not have Babel’s defense barrier, returnee causalities naturally occur.
 
 
The most difficult problem was the terrorists that rejected the concept of Babel and opposed the returnees.
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The most difficult problem is the terrorists that reject the concept of Babel and oppose the returnees.
 
 
One of the most famous terrorist organizations was the brave and fierce <Scarlet Dusk>. Their goal was to select like-minded comrades among the returnees and create a whole new country. To advertise their thoughts and boast their strengths, they would often take the most intense means. <Scarlet Dusk>’s strength was said to be not inferior to <COCOON>. The local military, and even the new United Nations and Babel all are hopeless against them.
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One of the most famous terrorist organization is the brave and fierce <Scarlet Dusk>. Their goal is to select like-minded comrades among the returnees and create a whole new country, to advertise their thoughts and boast their strengths, they will often take the most intense means. <Scarlet Dusk>’s strength is say to be not inferior to <COCOON>, the local military, and even the new United Nations and Babel all are hopeless against them.
 
 
Aside from <Scarlet Dusk>, the world still had many other terrorist organizations. Their common point was that they regarded Babel as their number one enemy.
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Aside from <Scarlet Dusk>, the world still have many other terrorist organization, their common point is that they regarded Babel as their number one enemy.
 
 
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Akatsuki looked at the somewhat immature Doumoto Kuzuha.
 
Akatsuki looked at the somewhat immature Doumoto Kuzuha.
 
 
A thin body as if it could be easily broken gently into pieces if just a bit of strength was used. Even a girl like this would be pushed onto the battlefield to act as cannon fodder, just because she was an alternative world returnee.
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A thin body as if could be easily broken gently into pieces if just a bit of strength was used. Even a girl like
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this will be pushed into the battlefield to act as cannon fodder, just because she was an alternative world returnee.
 
 
Akatsuki could not accept this cruel reality. This was a mistaken world, and it was horribly wrong too.
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Akatsuki could not accept this cruel reality. This is a mistaken world, and it is horribly wrong too.
 
 
 
After Kuzuha was aware of Akatsuki’s sight, she showed a mischievous smile.
 
After Kuzuha was aware of Akatsuki’s sight, she showed a mischievous smile.
 
 
“Although you were not aware of the situation before, how did the feeling of challenging the world feel?”
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“Although you were not aware of the situation before, but how did the feeling of challenging the world feel?”
 
 
 
“Not bad actually, not bad at all.”
 
“Not bad actually, not bad at all.”
 
 
Akatsuki also grinned. Isn’t it? This was the reason why Ousawa Akatsuki returned to this world.
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Akatsuki also grinned. Isn’t it? This is the reason why Ousawa Akatsuki returned to this world.
 
 
At that moment Akatsuki suddenly remembered one thing. He could not help but scratch his cheek embarrassedly.
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At that moment Akatsuki suddenly remembered one thing, he could not help but scratch his cheek embarrassedly.
 
 
“But… If I had known, I should have placed another type of fuse instead.”
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“But…If I had known, I should have placed another type of fuse instead.”
 
 
“How chaotic, what kind of fuse did you plant?”
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“How chaotic, what kind of fuse did you planted?”
 
 
 
“Well, probably something like this.”
 
“Well, probably something like this.”
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But no wonder, Akatsuki thought.
 
But no wonder, Akatsuki thought.
 
 
Suddenly being summoned to an alternative world, surviving a life that was unimaginably lonely, and finally managing to come back to the original world. The result of having to be split apart from her friends in the same age group, and start a unfamiliar school life with a bunch of strangers that were a few years older. In addition to that, she could be sent off to a battlefield any time. Having her emotions changed greatly is reasonable.
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Suddenly being summoned to an alternative world, survived a life that was unimaginably lonely, and finally managed to come back to the original world. The result having to be split apart from her friends in the same age group, and start a unfamiliar school life with a bunch of strangers that are a few years older. In addition to that, she could be sent off to the battlefield any time, having her emotions changed greatly is reasonable.
 
 
 
—Or Kuzuha must have lived in an environment where they had to suppress their feelings from a young age.
 
—Or Kuzuha must have lived in an environment where they had to suppress their feelings from a young age.
 
“That’s enough.”
 
“That’s enough.”
 
 
Her tone revealed a bit of unhappiness. The grumbling Kuzuha looked down at her feet. Akatsuki sensed from her tone and actions that she felt a bit of emotional upheaval. An expression of a normal girl flashed by, but this made Akatsuki kindle some hope. Yes, it was still not too late.
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Her tone reveals a bit of unhappiness. The grumbling Kuzuha looked down at her feet, Akatsuki sensed that from her tone and actions, she felt a bit of emotional upheaval. A expression of a normal girl flashed by, but this made Akatsuki kindled some hope. Yes, it is still not too late.
 
 
During his life at Alayzard, Akatsuki had seen the darkness within the humans. He understood that the people who are physically and mentally battered will eventually have a miserable fate, no matter whether it was male or female, old or young. However, Kuzuha was different, she still had some hope, a chance for her to recover the emotions that a normal female should have.
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During his life at Alayzard, Akatsuki saw the darkness within the humans, he understand that the people who are physically and mentally battered will eventually have a miserable fate, no matter whether it was male or female, old or young. However, Kuzuha was different, she still have some hope, a chance for her to recover the emotions that a normal female should have.
 
 
 
However he should still call it a day, as they often say “haste makes waste”.
 
However he should still call it a day, as they often say “haste makes waste”.
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He should first try to make her happy before continuing such a conversation.
 
He should first try to make her happy before continuing such a conversation.
 
 
“Your panties are very cute, is that a cat?”
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“You panties are very cute, is that a cat?”
 
 
 
“No, it’s a bear.”
 
“No, it’s a bear.”

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