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“…P…Pleased to meet you.”
 
“…P…Pleased to meet you.”
 
 
Miu thought back to her knocking down the combat skills instructor during the entrance inspection and suddenly felt a little guilty. Upon seeing this, the combat skills instructor could not help but show a wry smile.
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Miu thought back about her knocking down the combat skills instructor during the entrance inspection and suddenly felt a little guilty. Upon seeing this, the combat skills instructor could not help but show a wry smile.
 
 
 
“Perhaps some people may think I do not have the qualifications to act as the combat skills instructor, but still, pleased to meet you.”
 
“Perhaps some people may think I do not have the qualifications to act as the combat skills instructor, but still, pleased to meet you.”
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===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
A crisp and loud bell sound spread throughout the Babel campus, which meant that class had ended.
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A crisp and loud bell sound spreaded throughout the Babel campus, this represents that class has ended.
Both the clock’s long and short hand pointed directly up, and the morning classes came to the end.
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Both the clock’s long and short hand pointed directly on the top, the morning classes came to the end.
 
 
Currently it was lunch time. B-class students left the second arena in twos or threes, but Miu’s figure appeared inside the gym’s warehouse. Inside the warehouse it was extremely dark, and the air was filled with a damp mildew smell. Miu could not help but think back to Alayzard’s castle. This kind of smell was similar to the castle underground caves.
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Currently it is lunch time, B-class students left the second arena in twos or threes, but Miu’s figure appeared inside the gym’s warehouse. Inside the warehouse is extremely dark, the air is filled with a damp mildew smell, Miu could not help but think back to Alayzard’s castle. This kind of smell was similar to the castle underground caves.
 
 
The warehouse’s interior was broader than expected, as expected of the second arena and first arena’s shared warehouse. The deeper you entered, the darker the light became, until you could not see the other wall at all, not to mention the volume of the place. Miu could not imagine how big this warehouse was. She only knew that everywhere inside the warehouse there were piled up weapons used for combat training and magic props, as well as cushions of different sizes, iron balls and bags filled with lime. It looked like equipment for the physical education courses was also piled up here.
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The warehouse’s interior was broader than expected, as expected of the second arena and first arena’s shared warehouse. The deeper you enter, the darker the light becomes, you could not see the other wall at all, not to mention the volume of the place. Miu could not imagine how big this warehouse is, she only knows that everywhere inside the warehouse piled up weapons used for combat training and magic props, as well as cushions of different sizes, iron balls and bags filled with lime, looks like the physical education courses equipment is also piled up here.
 
 
As a mixture of the smell of her sweat and dust entered her lungs, Miu could not help but cough a few times.
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A mixture of the smell of her sweat and dust entered her lungs, Miu could not help but cough a few times.
 
 
 
“Class rep, is placing it here okay?”
 
“Class rep, is placing it here okay?”
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“Yes, thank you for your help.”
 
“Yes, thank you for your help.”
 
 
After the combat training course had ended, Miu stayed behind to help Kuzuha collect the equipment.
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After the combat training course has ended, Miu stayed behind to help Kuzuha to collect the equipment.
 
 
After obtaining the class rep’s agreement, Miu placed the triangular cone in a corner of the warehouse.
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After obtaining class rep’s agreement, Miu placed the triangular cone in a corner of the warehouse.
 
 
“Ah that’s right, Ousawa-san. This door will automatically lock itself after being closed, there is no way to open it from the inside, so you better pay attention to it.”
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“Ah that’s right, Ousawa-san. This door will automatically lock itself after being closed, there is no way to open it from the inside, you better pay attention to it.”
 
 
 
“Huh, really?”
 
“Huh, really?”
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“It can be opened from the outside, but not from the inside? Isn’t the design of this too problematic?”
 
“It can be opened from the outside, but not from the inside? Isn’t the design of this too problematic?”
 
 
“Just the opposite. This type of design where you can only open it from the outside is the foolproof security system. Inside the warehouse are very important magical props. If someone secretly snuck into the warehouse and moved the items away, wouldn’t that cause more trouble?”
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“Just the opposite. This type of design where you can only open it from the outside is the foolproof security system. Inside the warehouse are very important magical props, if someone secretly snuck into the warehouse and moved the items away, wouldn’t things be in more trouble?”
 
 
 
“That’s true, the thief could not allow the doors to be opened while stealing stuff.”
 
“That’s true, the thief could not allow the doors to be opened while stealing stuff.”
Miu suddenly understood. So the design of this warehouse was to capture thieves with evil intentions in their hearts.
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Miu suddenly understood. So the design of this warehouse is to capture thieves with evil intentions in their hearts.
 
 
Looking back, Akatsuki was still at the arena training hard.
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Looking back, Akatsuki is still at the arena training hard.
 
 
—Miu had expressed her willingness to help Akatsuki materialize his weapon using AD, but the instructor turned it down. The instructor felt that this problem was something that Akatsuki had to overcome by himself, plus Miu had her own course she should learn from and should not waste time here. So under the instructor’s instructions, Miu and Kuzuha formed a group, with Kuzuha teaching Miu how to use the materialized weapon.
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—After Miu expressed her willingness to help Akatsuki materialize his weapon using AD, but the instructor turned it down. The instructor felt that this problem is something that Akatsuki had to overcome by himself, plus Miu had her own course she should learn from and should not waste time here. So under the instructor’s instructions, Miu and Kuzuha formed a group, with Kuzuha teaching Miu how to use the materialized weapon.
 
 
The use of an AD materialized weapon could enhance the user’s magic and increase the amount being released. In a nutshell, it acted as a medium. Through the help of the AD, the user did not have to depend on the power of the gods and elves, and could use their own magic power to chant magic. But because the magic Miu used were almost all entirely drawing on elves and gods’s magic, if she wanted to use her own magic power to activate magic, Miu must create a new type of magic.
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The use of AD materialized weapon could enhance the user’s magic and increase the amount being released. In a nutshell, it acts as a medium. Through the help of AD, the user does not have to require on the power of the gods and elves, and can use their own magic power to chant magic. But because the magic Miu uses are almost all entirely drawing on elves and gods’s magic, if she wants to use her own magic power to activate magic, Miu must create a new type of magic.
 
 
But as long as you used the materialized weapon, it would enormously increase the magic drawn from elves and gods. In short, it could increase the power or shorten the chanting time. After accumulating a certain amount of experience, you could even skip materializing the weapon and directly use the AD as a medium.
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But as long as you use the materialized weapon, it will enormously increase the magic drawn from elves and gods, in short it can increase the power or shorten the chanting time. After accumulating a certain amount of experience, you can even skip materializing the weapon and directly use the AD as a medium.
 
 
 
…So that’s why Onizuka’s chanting speed was so fast.
 
…So that’s why Onizuka’s chanting speed was so fast.
 
 
Miu thought back to the quarrel on the first day of school. At that time Onizuka’s activated magic was extremely powerful, and the chanting speed was surprisingly fast. Presumably it must have been the results of using the AD as a medium.
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Miu thought back about the quarrel on the first day of school. At that time Onizuki’s activated magic was extremely powerful, the chanting speed was surprisingly fast, presumably it must be the results of using AD as a medium.
 
 
 
Aside from that, Miu also remembered another situation. The ice magic used by the Student Council President during the entrance inspection. Creating a giant icicle from the ground, it should be the same method as well.
 
Aside from that, Miu also remembered another situation. The ice magic used by the Student Council President during the entrance inspection. Creating a giant icicle from the ground, it should be the same method as well.
 
 
In addition, Akatsuki also seemed to encounter the same situation at the Student Council Office. According to Akatsuki’s description, the student council members almost instantly activated their magic.
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In addition, Akaktsuki also seemed to encounter the same situation at the Student Council Office. According to Akatsuki’s description, the student council members almost instantly activated their magic.
 
 
 
…But to not think about the occasion and stirring up trouble, this person went too overboard…
 
…But to not think about the occasion and stirring up trouble, this person went too overboard…
 
 
Miu sighed. After the school bell sounded for ending class, Akatsuki was called by the instructors to stay behind, probably due to the fact that he could not materialize his weapon. And from Akatsuki’s current expression, he probably could not obtain any decent results now. Thinking up to here, Miu could not help but laugh. The hero who defeated her father could actually have a moment when he was beaten. The world was really unpredictable.
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Miu sighed. After the school bell sounded for ending class, Akatsuki was called by the instructors to stay behind, probably due to the fact that he could not materialize his weapon. And from Akatsuki’s current expression, he probably could not obtain any decent results now. Thinking up to here, Miu could not help but laugh. The hero who defeated her father could actually have a moment when he was beaten, the world was really unpredictable.
 
 
 
“…Ha ha ha, to think that he also has these types of days.”
 
“…Ha ha ha, to think that he also has these types of days.”
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“Whoa—!”
 
“Whoa—!”
 
 
The sound suddenly came from beside her, and the startled Miu almost jumped back. Turning around, Akatsuki was standing behind her. Gently pressing her pounding heart, Miu said sulkily:
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The sound suddenly came from beside her, the startled Miu almost jumped back. Turning around, Akatsuki was standing behind her. Gently pressing her pounding heart, Miu said sulkily:
 
 
“D…Don’t scare people okay? So how were the after class tutoring results? Did you successfully materialize your weapon?”
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“D…Don’t scare people okay? So how was the after class tutoring results? Did you successfully materialize your weapon?”
 
 
“No, I still didn’t succeed, so I’m taking a short break. It looks like afternoon is real combat training, so the instructor specifically told me to eat more, and recover my stamina.”
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“No, I still didn’t succeed, so I’m taking a short break. It looks like afternoon is real combat training, the instructor specifically told me to eat more, and recover my stamina.”
 
 
 
After saying this, Akatsuki narrowed his eyes.
 
After saying this, Akatsuki narrowed his eyes.
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“W…What is it…?”
 
“W…What is it…?”
 
 
Facing Miu’s questions, Kuzuha replied rather calmly, while her gaze remained at the depth of the warehouse.
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Facing Miu’s questions, Kuzuha reply rather calmly, her gaze remained at the depth of the warehouse.
 
 
 
“—I seem to hear the sound of people talking.”
 
“—I seem to hear the sound of people talking.”
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When previously entering the sports warehouse, the door was closed shut.
 
When previously entering the sports warehouse, the door was closed shut.
 
 
If someone was accidently locked in the warehouse, it should be reasonable to stay close to the door, to be more easily discovered by people on the outside.
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If someone was accidently locked in the warehouse, it should be reasonable to stay as close to the door, this will be easier to be discovered by people on the outside.
 
 
If they were hiding in the depth of the warehouse, their intention was to avoid people’s eyes and ears.
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If they are hiding in the depth of the warehouse, their intention is to avoid people’s eyes and ears.
 
 
 
“C…Could it be that you’ve heard wrong?”
 
“C…Could it be that you’ve heard wrong?”
 
 
Miu, who was following behind Kuzuha, spoke quietly. Deep inside the warehouse, it was both dark and humid. The atmosphere was almost like a haunted house. After walking for a bit, the sound of people speaking really did seem to come from the front. This terrifying atmosphere made Miu horrified. At this moment, Kuzuha, who was in front, suddenly stopped, and crouched down gently to avoid being found by the other party.
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Miu, who was following behind Kuzuha, spoke quietly. Deep inside the warehouse, it was both dark and humid, its atmosphere was almost like a haunted house. After walking for a bit, the sound of people speaking really did seem to come from the front, this terrifying atmosphere made Miu horrified. At this moment, Kuzuha who was in front suddenly stopped, crouched down gently to avoid being found by the other party.
 
 
 
“… Found it.”
 
“… Found it.”
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“R…Really?”
 
“R…Really?”
 
 
Miu and Akatsuki both crouched down. Hiding behind Kuzuha, Miu stuck out her head to look around. She noticed figures in the shadows five meters in front. In total there were two people sitting on the soft cushion, but she did not know what they were talking about.
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Miu and Akatsuki both crouched down. Hiding behind Kuzuha, Miu stuck out her head to look around, she noticed figures in the shadows five meters in front. In total there were two people sitting on the soft cushion, but she did not know what they were talking about.
 
 
 
“…Huh? Wait… Isn’t that…?”
 
“…Huh? Wait… Isn’t that…?”
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After confirming the figure of one of them, Miu was shocked.
 
After confirming the figure of one of them, Miu was shocked.
 
 
Using her pupils that were gradually adjusting to the dark to look carefully once again, Yes that’s right.
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Using her pupils that are gradually adjusting to the dark to look carefully once again, Yes that’s right.
 
 
 
“…That’s Izumi.”
 
“…That’s Izumi.”
 
 
The figure that was closer to them was Chikage. She and another female student that Miu did not know were sitting side by side and seemed to be talking. Miu felt relieved. Chikage was absolutely not a suspicious individual.
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The figure that was closer to them was Chikage, she and another female student that Miu does not know were sitting side by side and seems to be talking. Miu felt relieved, Chikage was absolutely not a suspicious individual.
 
 
 
…Huh? Wait a second…
 
…Huh? Wait a second…
 
 
What was Chikage hiding here? Just as Miu was puzzled, the sight in front of her eyes showed her the answer—Chikage kissed the other female student’s lips.
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What is Chikage hiding here? Just as Miu was puzzled, the sight in front of her eyes showed her the answer — Chikage kissed the other female student’s lips.
 
 
 
“Whattttt~~!”
 
“Whattttt~~!”
 
 
Miu could not withstand it and shouted, then afterwards hurriedly covered her mouth. The scene in front of her eyes was the truth, but Miu could not accept this reality.
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Miu could not withstand it and shouted, and afterwards hurriedly covered her mouth. The scene in front of her eyes was the truth, but Miu could not accept this reality.
 
 
 
…Female with Female…?
 
…Female with Female…?
 
 
Miu, with her ears completely red, stared at the two people, and watched as Chikage slowly pushed down the other female student.
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Miu with her ears completely red stared at the two people, and watched as Chikage slowly pushed down the other female student.
 
 
A deep passionate kiss. Their limbs entangled, each demanding from the other.
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A deep passionate kiss. Their limbs entangles, each demanding from the other.
 
 
 
Akatsuki opened his mouth and said with a calm tone.
 
Akatsuki opened his mouth and said with a calm tone.
 
 
“Looks like Izumi’s experiences are quite abundant.”
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“Looks like Izumi’s experiences is quite abundant.”
 
 
 
“… I can’t watch it any longer.”
 
“… I can’t watch it any longer.”
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“<nowiki>~~~</nowiki>!”
 
“<nowiki>~~~</nowiki>!”
 
 
Their good deed was caught by others, it was probably extremely embarrassing. The female student, who was enjoying her sexual conduct with Chikage, blushed with a reddened face and flew over from in front of Miu and Akatsuki, then disappeared in the direction of the entrance. Afterwards, a sound of a heavy object being locked came from far far behind.
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Their good deed was caught by others, it was probably extremely embarrassing. The female student, who was enjoying her sexual conduct with Chikage, blushed with a reddened face flew over from in front of Miu and Akatsuki and disappeared in the direction of the entrance. Afterwards, a sound of a heavy objected being locked came from far far behind.
 
 
Kuzuha and Chikage were currently engaging in a fierce dispute, and seemed to not have heard the sound.
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Kuzuha and Chikage is currently engaging in a fierce dispute, and seemed to not have heard the sound.
 
 
 
At that moment Akatsuki suddenly remembered something.
 
At that moment Akatsuki suddenly remembered something.
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“…Huh? So…”
 
“…Huh? So…”
 
 
Miu, who had not yet awoken from the shock of seeing two women entwining among each other, was suddenly awake, and did not seem to understand the meaning of Akatsuki’s words at that moment. After a period of time, she violently woke up.
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Miu, who was yet awaken from the shock of seeing two women entwining among each other, was suddenly awake, and did not seem to understanding the meaning of Akatsuki’s words at that moment. After a period of time, she violently woke up.
 
 
 
“—It can’t be! Are we all stuck in the warehouse now?”
 
“—It can’t be! Are we all stuck in the warehouse now?”
 
 
Miu panickedly stood up, her elbow accurately hitting Akatsuki’s jaw.
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Miu panicky stood up, her elbow accurately hitting Akatsuki’s jaw.
 
 
 
“Ah—”
 
“Ah—”
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“Ah ha ha … This can’t be real, this can’t be real… Oh God <nowiki>~~~</nowiki>!”
 
“Ah ha ha … This can’t be real, this can’t be real… Oh God <nowiki>~~~</nowiki>!”
 
 
Her smile suddenly disappeared. A panicked Miu used all her strength and attempted to open the heavy doors, but the doors did not move at all. This was also a matter of fact, if a single female’s power could pull open the door, how could it be called a foolproof security system.
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Her smile suddenly disappeared, a panicked Miu used all her strength and attempted to open the heavy doors, but the doors did not move at all. This is also a matter of fact, if a single female’s power could pull open the door, how could it be called a foolproof security system.
 
 
 
“W…What can I do…”
 
“W…What can I do…”
 
 
Behind the dejected Miu, Chikage and Kuzuha were still quarrelling.
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Behind the dejected Miu, Chikage and Kuzuha are still quarrelling.
 
 
In this huge warehouse, you could only hear the sounds of the dispute coming from the two people.
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In this huge warehouse, you could only heard the sounds of the dispute coming for the two people.
   
 
===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===

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