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Stunned she had spoke out, while she lowered her bow that had been poised. It seemed that the power of the fireball Listy released was equivalent the magic arrow Chikage was about to shoot. After what she witnessed, Kuzuha abruptly narrowed her eyes,
 
Stunned she had spoke out, while she lowered her bow that had been poised. It seemed that the power of the fireball Listy released was equivalent the magic arrow Chikage was about to shoot. After what she witnessed, Kuzuha abruptly narrowed her eyes,
 
 
"More than that, the way the fireball was repelled...... was close to an absolute barriers of a higher life form."
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"More than that the fireball was repelled...... it's close to an absolute barriers of a higher life form."
 
 
 
"That was his doing."
 
"That was his doing."
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Listy turned her eyes towards Kaidou.
 
Listy turned her eyes towards Kaidou.
 
 
"He and Akatsuki are fighting on the other side of this barrier. I tried to activate magic directly behind the barrier, also to no avail... ... Perhaps he set up that barrier to block any magic from the outside."
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"He and Akatsuki are fighting on the other side of this barrier. I tried to activate magic directly behind the barrier, also to no avail... ... Perhaps he set up that barrier to block any magical attacks from the outside."
 
 
 
"Have you tried physical attacks?"
 
"Have you tried physical attacks?"
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With Crimson Twilight openly opposing COCOON it went without saying what his motivation and intention was in attending JPN-Babel.
 
With Crimson Twilight openly opposing COCOON it went without saying what his motivation and intention was in attending JPN-Babel.
 
 
If what Akatsuki spoke of was true, the thing that should be paid attention to wasn't the past, but the present.
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If what Akatsuki spoke of was true, the thing that should be paid attention to isn't the past, but the present.
 
 
 
And that was the current situation with Kaidou blocking their way.
 
And that was the current situation with Kaidou blocking their way.
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-- Still until now, the two had an unwritten understanding not to look under that card.
 
-- Still until now, the two had an unwritten understanding not to look under that card.
 
 
Kaidou didn't have a clue as to what Akatsuki was thinking, however at least by him doing so he was able to maintain his position as a friend. It was even so now. Despite being instructed to temporarily delay him by Cecil, Kaidou was not here as a member of "Crimson Twilight," but as his friend stopping him from entering into their domain.
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Kaidou didn't have a clue as to what Akatsuki is thinking, however at least by him doing so he was able to maintain his position as a friend. It was even so now. Despite being instructed to temporarily delay him by Cecil, Kaidou was not here as a member of "Crimson Twilight," but as his friend stopping him from entering into their domain.
 
 
 
However,
 
However,
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While at the same taking into account his current physical state, he couldn't help think -- the exhaustion from this technique was too intense.
 
While at the same taking into account his current physical state, he couldn't help think -- the exhaustion from this technique was too intense.
 
 
-- One of the secrets of renkan keikikou was to substantially boost the Ki inside the body, beyond the limits of the body. While there was the usual physical burden to the body, that kind of technique he just used consumed willpower. And because there was no easy to understand signals like pain, it could lead to things like not being able to move anymore before he could notice.
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-- One of the secrets of renkan keikikou was to substantially boost the Ki inside the body, beyond the limits of the body. While there was the usual physical burden to the body, that kind of technique he just used consumed willpower. And because there was no easy way to understand signals like pain, it could lead to things like not being able to move anymore before he could notice.
 
 
 
...... However that didn't matter.
 
...... However that didn't matter.
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"--------"
 
"--------"
 
 
The atmosphere around them rapidly became strained. So much that neither one could take a breath.
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The atmosphere around them rapidly becoming strained. So much so neither one could take a breath.
 
 
 
And the next moment -- Akatsuki and Kaidou's figures disappeared.
 
And the next moment -- Akatsuki and Kaidou's figures disappeared.

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