Editing Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 9 Chapter 1

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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
 
 
It was like a white light shining through the darkness.
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It was like a white light shinning through the darkness.
 
 
 
Even with her eyes closed, Ousawa Miu's consciousness still sensed the slight shimmer.
 
Even with her eyes closed, Ousawa Miu's consciousness still sensed the slight shimmer.
 
 
The instability of floating in the air, even further amplified the illusion of being half awake and half asleep.
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The instability of floating in the air, even further amplified the illusion of being half wake and half asleep.
 
 
 
...... What is this?
 
...... What is this?
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How it had turned out this way, she could not remember.
 
How it had turned out this way, she could not remember.
 
 
However, she understood that because of her, everyone was exposed to danger.
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However, she understood that because of her, everyone was exposed to the danger.
 
 
 
As she thought of that, her chest was filled with guilt. Rather it was that she wished she could disappear from this world. In fact, if Miu desired it, her own consciousness would vanish at once.
 
As she thought of that, her chest was filled with guilt. Rather it was that she wished she could disappear from this world. In fact, if Miu desired it, her own consciousness would vanish at once.
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Even if I can't move a finger or even open my eyelids I have to fight, too.
 
Even if I can't move a finger or even open my eyelids I have to fight, too.
 
 
I will bear with it, and carefully look on. Everybody will come. They will without fail make it to where I am.
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I will bear with it, and carefully look on. Everybody will come. They will without fail make to where I am.
 
 
 
Miu so believed.
 
Miu so believed.

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