Editing Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 9 Chapter 1

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-- However, Haruka face shrank as her magic never reached her opponents.
 
-- However, Haruka face shrank as her magic never reached her opponents.
 
 
More precisely, the moment before they should have hit a protective barrier suddenly raised from the floor blocking her magic.
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More precisely, the moment before they should of hit a protective barrier suddenly raised from the floor blocking her magic.
 
 
 
And after completing its role, the protective wall quietly crumbled.
 
And after completing its role, the protective wall quietly crumbled.
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The edge of the blade cut into the top of the dragon's head, and split open its enormous body without a sound.
 
The edge of the blade cut into the top of the dragon's head, and split open its enormous body without a sound.
 
 
-- That should have been the end.
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-- That should of been the end.
 
 
 
But, during the time when he was tearing through the chest area of the dragon.
 
But, during the time when he was tearing through the chest area of the dragon.
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It to came towards her with its mouth wide open and sharp fangs exposed.
 
It to came towards her with its mouth wide open and sharp fangs exposed.
 
 
Listy should have been on guard against a surprise attack from the dragon, and that gave that serious consideration.
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Listy should of been on guard against a surprise attack from the dragon, and that gave that serious consideration.
 
 
 
But towards the sudden situation, Listy's only thought was on seeing if Akatsuki was alright.
 
But towards the sudden situation, Listy's only thought was on seeing if Akatsuki was alright.

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