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——That tone, seemed to have an inexplicably strong confidence.
 
——That tone, seemed to have an inexplicably strong confidence.
   
Her pupils, which looked like lenses, were glaring at me as if she wanted to pierce through me with that gaze. <!--Check up last part of the sentence, sounds kind of wrong. Here ya go. Just had piano lessons, now for dinner, but I'll finish this chapter up. Thanks for the help <3-->
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Her pupils, which looked like lenses, were staring at me as if she wanted to pierce through me with that gaze. <!--Check up last part of the sentence, sounds kind of wrong. Here ya go. Just had piano lessons, now for dinner, but I'll finish this chapter up. Thanks for the help <3-->
   
 
It is really transparent, the sniper rifle's scope.
 
It is really transparent, the sniper rifle's scope.

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