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From the parking lot, they hurtled into the darkness.
 
From the parking lot, they hurtled into the darkness.
   
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Each one burst into sparks in the air...afterwards, we could see the remote-controlled helicopters, leaving a trail of smoke, fall from the sky. <!--W/O modifiers: We could see the remote-controlled helicopters fall from the sky.-->
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Each one burst into sparks in the air...afterwards, we could see that the remote-controlled helicopters, leaving a trail of smoke, falling from the sky.
   
 
"If you run the... Saori-san there...break her Ahaha Ahahahahahahaha"
 
"If you run the... Saori-san there...break her Ahaha Ahahahahahahaha"
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Reki and I crossed over the parking lot, taking care to keep ourselves hidden in the shadows of the trees--
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Reki and I crossed over the parking lot, being inconspicuous to keep ourselves hidden in the shadows of the trees--
   
 
First, the forest, afterward, we enter the jungle that stretches far behind.
 
First, the forest, afterward, we enter the jungle that stretches far behind.
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From the faint sound of running water, I thought that...it was probably a rather shallow river.
 
From the faint sound of running water, I thought that...it was probably a rather shallow river.
   
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I don't know whether she had night vision, but Reki, moving lightly, crossed the river, almost like a water fairy. <!--My bad.-->
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I don't know whether if she had night vision, but Reki, moving lightly, crossed the river, almost like a water fairy.
   
 
Apparently, there were stumps and rocks, and it seemed that she had crossed over above them.
 
Apparently, there were stumps and rocks, and it seemed that she had crossed over above them.

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