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"[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sugamo Sugamo]. My grandparents are living there."
 
"[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sugamo Sugamo]. My grandparents are living there."
   
"Sugamo...? Were you planning to go there with this Shinkansen? If so, it's a shame."
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"Sugamo...? Were you planning to go there with this Shinkanse? If so, it's a shame."
   
 
Saying that, it seemed that Aria wasn't very familiar with Japanese geography.
 
Saying that, it seemed that Aria wasn't very familiar with Japanese geography.
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Alright--from now on, it's time to fight. As if telling herself that.
 
Alright--from now on, it's time to fight. As if telling herself that.
   
It's just a theory that when a two-man cell hasn't fought together for a long time, they should have some idle chatter in order to synchronize, but we had just finished with that. We had done it arbitrarily in the conversation just now.
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It's just a theory that when a two-man cell hasn't fought together for a long time, they should have some idle chatter in order to match their breathing, but we had just finished with that. We had done it arbitrarily in the conversation just now.
   
 
"Let's go."
 
"Let's go."
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Leaving Aria, holding her skirt with both hands, her face having become red, below, I--
 
Leaving Aria, holding her skirt with both hands, her face having become red, below, I--
   
-extended my torso out from the rectangular exit leading out to the roof into the outside of the train, which had become completely dark.
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-extended my torso out from the rectangular exit leading out to the roof into the outside of the train, having become completely dark.
   
 
"...!"
 
"...!"
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My feet and Koko's feet met each other midair--
 
My feet and Koko's feet met each other midair--
   
And, I leaped off her feet as if they were a jumping platform.
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And, I leaped off her feet as if they were jumping platform.
   
 
Meimei and the me in Hysteria Mode. I jumped with the combined power of two. High. Jumping over the flowing power lines and the hanger of the power pole holding them up, swiftly flying upwards for two, three meters.
 
Meimei and the me in Hysteria Mode. I jumped with the combined power of two. High. Jumping over the flowing power lines and the hanger of the power pole holding them up, swiftly flying upwards for two, three meters.
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From the air, I looked down at the fans, dyed crimson and gold, widening.
 
From the air, I looked down at the fans, dyed crimson and gold, widening.
   
I had seen Shirayuki use battle-function fans before, but they had been made out of bamboo and paper.
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I had seen Shirayuki use battle-function fans before, but that had been made out of bamboo and paper.
   
 
However, Meimei's Chinese fans were made of metal. The edge, gleaming in the moonlight, was a blade.
 
However, Meimei's Chinese fans were made of metal. The edge, gleaming in the moonlight, was a blade.
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I kicked off of it with my spikes, dancing into the air once again.
 
I kicked off of it with my spikes, dancing into the air once again.
   
And once more, I fired the Desert Eagle in midair.
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And once again, I fired the Desert Eagle in midair.
   
 
---''BANG! ZNG!''
 
---''BANG! ZNG!''

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