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-placed the stock of the Dragunov at her feet.
 
-placed the stock of the Dragunov at her feet.
   
"The '''Reki''' of Ulus asks. The oath you spoke of--not killing Kinji-san, will you abide by it?"
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"The '''Reki''' of Ulus asks. The oath of just now--not killing Kinji-san, will you keep it?"
   
"You shouldn't make fun of me. Koko is the princess of the prideful Wei."
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"It's not good to make fun of me. Koko is the princess of the prideful Wei."
   
"--If you break the oath, all 46 girls of the Ulus will destroy you. With everything that they have, the skills that had once conquered the world, they will definitely take your life. By now, you should understand this."
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"--If you break the oath, all the 46 girls of the Ulus will destroy you. With that everything, once having conquered the world, they will definitely take your life. You should have understood."
   
 
Straightening her back, Reki placed the barrel under her own chin.
 
Straightening her back, Reki placed the barrel under her own chin.

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