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This... this seems promising. Time to change topic, and probe her once more time.
 
This... this seems promising. Time to change topic, and probe her once more time.
   
"Add.. adding on, this Officer has a 19 year elder brother. Although he's very strict, but he's very good looking."
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"Add.. adding on, this Officer has a 19 year elder brother. Although he's very strict, but he very good looking."
   
 
Drawing her attention with these words, Ranbyou, who had written in her self-introduction column "Types that I like: Strong, forceful types"--managed to maintain her dignity as a teacher, her mouth remaining in the shape of 'へ' without much change.....
 
Drawing her attention with these words, Ranbyou, who had written in her self-introduction column "Types that I like: Strong, forceful types"--managed to maintain her dignity as a teacher, her mouth remaining in the shape of 'へ' without much change.....
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Tamamo took out a gem which looked like a ruby. That's the crystallized form of a piece of the golden shell which shields the Hidan.
 
Tamamo took out a gem which looked like a ruby. That's the crystallized form of a piece of the golden shell which shields the Hidan.
   
Maintaining her seiza, Shirayuki moved backwards, then bowed deeply.
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Maintaining her seize, Shirayuki moved backwards, then bowed deeply.
   
 
"Our deepest apologies, if only the Hotogi Miko could have made the Golden Shell sturdier in the past, this would have never..."
 
"Our deepest apologies, if only the Hotogi Miko could have made the Golden Shell sturdier in the past, this would have never..."
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Tamamo's gaze suddenly became sharp like never before.
 
Tamamo's gaze suddenly became sharp like never before.
   
"Shirayuki, stop speaking. Coincidentally Tohyama is here as well. Hotogi and Tohyama can share the workload and help one another."
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"Shirayuki, stop speaking. Coincidentally Tohyama is here as well. Hotogi and Tohyama can share the work and help one another."
   
 
".....What are you talking about. What's happened with the Irokane Ayame?"
 
".....What are you talking about. What's happened with the Irokane Ayame?"

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