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Managing the affairs in the mess hall, the girls will always be drawing a lot of attention. It was really an impossible situation.
 
Managing the affairs in the mess hall, the girls will always be drawing a lot of attention. It was really an impossible situation.
   
The costumes of the girls were resplendent, and an atmosphere of a cosplay coffee shop was pervading the mess hall.
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The costumes of the girls were resplendent, and an atmosphere of a cosplay coffeeshop was pervading the mess hall.
   
 
The male customers seemed to be very happy.... maybe because they still have no idea how fierce the girls of Butei High are.
 
The male customers seemed to be very happy.... maybe because they still have no idea how fierce the girls of Butei High are.
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"It's alright. Don't let Ranbyou see you, rest for a while. I'll deal with the work."
 
"It's alright. Don't let Ranbyou see you, rest for a while. I'll deal with the work."
   
Thinking and looking out for her, I led Nakasorachi towards the direction of the lounge....
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Thinking and looking out for her, I led Nakasorachi in the direction of the lounge....
   
 
"Ai ai! It's no wonder you're Ki-kun the Flagship Architect! You're now taking on the Nakasorachi route!"
 
"Ai ai! It's no wonder you're Ki-kun the Flagship Architect! You're now taking on the Nakasorachi route!"
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The muffled sounds of their voices came from above the plywood.
 
The muffled sounds of their voices came from above the plywood.
   
With my head finally plucked out, I lay suffering on the ground and looked upwards--
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With my head finally plucked out, I proned on the ground and look upwards--
   
 
".....!"
 
".....!"
   
This time it has turned into a situation where I was down-slope and looking up at Aria's short skirt.
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This time it has turned into a position where I was down-slope and looking up at Aria's short skirt.
   
 
I'm now caught in a position of a pervert whom should be arrested by the police in the first place.
 
I'm now caught in a position of a pervert whom should be arrested by the police in the first place.
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"Don't put me in the same league as you!"
 
"Don't put me in the same league as you!"
   
Jeanne swiftly lifted her head, her whole face blushing red like Aria.
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Jeanne swifty lifted her head, her whole face blushing red like Aria.
   
 
As Jeanne is 100% white Caucasian, so putting it more accurately, her face was pink.
 
As Jeanne is 100% white Caucasian, so putting it more accurately, her face was pink.
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As for me, I have not much of popularity, Within the kohais, only Fuma knows about me.
 
As for me, I have not much of popularity, Within the kohais, only Fuma knows about me.
   
(Anyway.... looks like I won't be turned into a human hoarfrost.)
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(Anyway.... looks like I won't be turned into a human hoarforst.)
   
 
Just as I started to relax myself--
 
Just as I started to relax myself--
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Tamamo said, while standing within a beam of light.
 
Tamamo said, while standing within a beam of light.
   
She was wearing a small uniform cap with a wave-shaped hem, and there were actually something shaped like two fox ears poking upwards at the top of the cap.
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She was wearing a small uniform cap with a wave-shaped hem, and there were actually something shaped like 2 fox ears poking upwards at the top of the cap.
   
Hey, is this really alright.
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Hey, is this really ok.
   
 
"Yes, Tohyama. I hath heard you brought defeat to Hilda. Well done!"
 
"Yes, Tohyama. I hath heard you brought defeat to Hilda. Well done!"
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"Why, thou seems verily interested in me. Art thou smitten with me."
 
"Why, thou seems verily interested in me. Art thou smitten with me."
   
Tamamo laughingly said to me, who was staring fixedly at her.
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Tamamo laughingly said to me, who was staring fixedly at her.
   
 
"Don't talk nonsense. The age difference is too big."
 
"Don't talk nonsense. The age difference is too big."
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It was a very peaceful, long-standing Shirayuki-type of smile.
 
It was a very peaceful, long-standing Shirayuki-type of smile.
   
"The Hotogi Miko are protective Mikos. We have always fought for the sake of protecting. The chaos in the country, wars, and the few "Battles" encountered, protecting is what we always, and always will do. And..."
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"The Hotogi Miko are protective Mikos. We have alway fought for the sake of protecting. The chaos in the country, wars, and the few "Battles" encountered, protecting is what we always, and always will do. And..."
   
 
Shirayuki's expression hardened.
 
Shirayuki's expression hardened.

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