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This is due to the fact that interviews will be taking place during the cultural festival, and to avoid leaving negative impressions on the parents of special elementary and middle school students with an interest in enrolling into Butei High, these preparations beforehand are absolutely necessary.
 
This is due to the fact that interviews will be taking place during the cultural festival, and to avoid leaving negative impressions on the parents of special elementary and middle school students with an interest in enrolling into Butei High, these preparations beforehand are absolutely necessary.
   
Just that, all these troublesome work are the responsibility of the First Years.
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Just that, all these troublesome works are the responsibility of the First Years.
   
 
The internal ranking system in Butei High is as strict as those in the military.
 
The internal ranking system in Butei High is as strict as those in the military.
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These promotional posters were collected from students in Butei High.
 
These promotional posters were collected from students in Butei High.
   
There were oil paintings, illustration-styled drawings, strong graphics created by computers.... more than several dozen of different styles.
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There were oil paintings, illustration-styled drawings, strong graphics created by computers.... more than several dozens different styles.
   
 
(Every one of them is pretty well done....)
 
(Every one of them is pretty well done....)
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A girl's voice came from outside.
 
A girl's voice came from outside.
   
Ranbyou, who had come to check on the results of the cosplay, ordered me to work in the kitchen.
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Ranbyou, who had came to check on the results of the cosplay, ordered me to work in the kitchen.
   
 
"There's no police officer with such a gloomy look in his eyes."
 
"There's no police officer with such a gloomy look in his eyes."
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Coming in for the afternoon shift, Hiraga who was a girl, was caught by Ranbyou with one hand and swung in a circle in mid-air.
 
Coming in for the afternoon shift, Hiraga who was a girl, was caught by Ranbyou with one hand and swung in a circle in mid-air.
   
The angry looking Hiraga had her feet twisted in an impossible direction, her tendon had probably been injured by Ranbyou. Our violent teacher does not go easy on anyone, including girls.
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The angry looking Hiraga had her feet twisted in a impossible direction, her tendon had probably been injured by Ranbyou. Our violent teacher does not go easy on anyone, including girls.
   
 
"What the hell, Hiraga--anyone is stronger than you, can you at least increase your height somewhat?"
 
"What the hell, Hiraga--anyone is stronger than you, can you at least increase your height somewhat?"
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The male customers seemed to be very happy.... maybe because they still have no idea how fierce the girls of Butei High are.
 
The male customers seemed to be very happy.... maybe because they still have no idea how fierce the girls of Butei High are.
   
For the normal boys, they probably view this as a simple affair of being waited upon by service staff, being able to be served food by a cosplaying female high school student was already an enjoyable affair by itself.
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For the normal boys, they probably view this as a simple affair of being waited upon by service staff, being able to be served food by a cosplaying female high school student was already a enjoyable affair by itself.
   
 
But, if those girls are hired by your competitors, they might end up sending you bullets and explosives instead.
 
But, if those girls are hired by your competitors, they might end up sending you bullets and explosives instead.
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Not good, it seems like she can't really work on the job.
 
Not good, it seems like she can't really work on the job.
   
Firstly, she should be wearing contact lens for her poor vision, but she's still bumping into walls.
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Firstly, she should wearing contact lens for her poor vision, but she's still bumping into walls.
   
She was responsible for the taking, repeating and listing orders, but due to some reason, her face turned red when our eyes meet, resulting in her accidentally tripping over a foot.
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She was responsible for the taking, repeating and listing orders, but due for some reason, her face turned red when our eyes meet, resulting in her accidentally tripping over a foot.
   
 
What's more baffling is, in the process of falling, the tray she was holding in her hands forcefully smacked into her own face. It seems to be all my fault, but it looks like she's really not suitable for this kind of work.....
 
What's more baffling is, in the process of falling, the tray she was holding in her hands forcefully smacked into her own face. It seems to be all my fault, but it looks like she's really not suitable for this kind of work.....
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Fortunately the plywood was very thin, allowing me to escape from the brink of death...
 
Fortunately the plywood was very thin, allowing me to escape from the brink of death...
   
Using a finishing move on me while I was in a difficult position, this was adding insult to injury.
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Using a finishing move on me while I was in an difficult position, this was adding insult to injury.
   
 
Woah woah! A fourth year elementary school girl performing a pile-driver on a police officer! This scene can only be seen in Butei High!
 
Woah woah! A fourth year elementary school girl performing a pile-driver on a police officer! This scene can only be seen in Butei High!
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(Should I fight.....!)
 
(Should I fight.....!)
   
If I enter Hysteria mode now, a tragedy will definitely occur before I achieve victory. Now that the three of us are alone in the lounge which hardly anyone comes by, the moment Hysteria mode gets activated will be certainly be an earth shaking event. If that's the case, the innocent Nakasorachi will become a victim as well.
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If I enter Hysteria mode now, a tragedy will definitely occur before I achieve victory. Now that the three of us are alone in the lounge which hardly anyone comes by, the moment Hysteria mode gets activated will be certainly be a earth shaking event. If that's the case, the innocent Nakasorachi will become a victim as well.
   
 
I took a defensive approach--
 
I took a defensive approach--
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"Tohyama."
 
"Tohyama."
   
From the fourth preparation room, which was so small and cramp it could hardly be counted as a room, came a call for me, and it was done with the door closed.
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The fourth preparation room, which was so small and cramp it could hardly be counted as a room, came a call for me, and it was done with the door closed.
   
 
"Jeanne?"
 
"Jeanne?"
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"Are you stupid, of course I'm wearing clothes, but.... about this set of clothes, I want to discuss it with you."
 
"Are you stupid, of course I'm wearing clothes, but.... about this set of clothes, I want to discuss it with you."
   
Her reply caused me to have some doubts, so I entered the changing room.
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Her reply caused me to have some doubts,so I entered the changing room.
   
 
In the changing room, Jeanne was wearing the "family cafe" type of frilly female waitress uniform.....
 
In the changing room, Jeanne was wearing the "family cafe" type of frilly female waitress uniform.....
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I said to Jeanne to pacify her.
 
I said to Jeanne to pacify her.
   
"Tell me your opinions! You have seen me like this before. What do you think of it."
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"Tell me your opinions! You seen me like this before. What do you think of it."
   
 
"I already told you back then. It's really cute! You don't have to worry."
 
"I already told you back then. It's really cute! You don't have to worry."
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Jeanne stood up, waving her featherlight sleeves.
 
Jeanne stood up, waving her featherlight sleeves.
   
What a troublesome girl as well.
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What a troublesome guy as well.
   
 
Just as I was starting to feel a bit tired, Jeanne leaned over with a 'pleading for help' look on her face .
 
Just as I was starting to feel a bit tired, Jeanne leaned over with a 'pleading for help' look on her face .
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From now on, I'll use Jeanna and Shirayuki as a positive example, while the others will be deemed as bad examples.
 
From now on, I'll use Jeanna and Shirayuki as a positive example, while the others will be deemed as bad examples.
   
As for me, I have not much of popularity, Within the kohais, only Fuma knows about me.
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As for me, I have not much of a popularity, Within the kohais, only Fuma knows about me.
   
 
(Anyway.... looks like I won't be turned into a human hoarfrost.)
 
(Anyway.... looks like I won't be turned into a human hoarfrost.)
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"...."
 
"...."
   
Wearing her graceful skirt, she leapt out from the window.
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Wearing her graceful skirt, she leapt out from the the window.
   
 
"Hey! Hey...."
 
"Hey! Hey...."
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"..... It's really such a joy!"
 
"..... It's really such a joy!"
   
Jeanne usually makes people feel like she's a Hollywood actress, always with an uptight look on her face. So her expression now could be considered to be truly refreshing.
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Jeanne usually make people feel like she's an Hollywood actress, always with an uptight look on her face. So her expression now could be considered to be truly refreshing.
   
 
It even feels like it's the first time I'm getting to know her true self.
 
It even feels like it's the first time I'm getting to know her true self.
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Perhaps she will eventually start showing the side of herself which she has been hiding, little by little.
 
Perhaps she will eventually start showing the side of herself which she has been hiding, little by little.
   
Through meaningless activities, the school is a place that lets its students grow continuously, Or at least it's a place that gives you the chance to grow.
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Through meaningless activities, the school is a place that lets its students to grow continuously, Or at least it's a place that gives you the chance to grow.
   
 
"Of course, if it's a normal school.... there should be much more chances like this."
 
"Of course, if it's a normal school.... there should be much more chances like this."
   
I looked at my watch, in another 7 to 8 minutes, Jeanne will have to take over the shift.
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I looked at my watch, in another 7 to 8 minutes, Jeanne will have to takeover the shift.
   
 
Jeanne.
 
Jeanne.
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"Yes, Tohyama. I hath heard you brought defeat to Hilda. Well done!"
 
"Yes, Tohyama. I hath heard you brought defeat to Hilda. Well done!"
   
Swish! Tamamo leapt off the steel beam with animal-like movements.
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Swish! Tamamo leapt off the steel beam animal-like movements.
   
 
With her movements, I saw her tail which was hidden under her skirt.
 
With her movements, I saw her tail which was hidden under her skirt.
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Using both hands, Tamamo hugged my neck tightly with no intention of letting go.
 
Using both hands, Tamamo hugged my neck tightly with no intention of letting go.
   
"Then you should at least change your form from a second year elementary schooler to a baby."
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"Then you should at least change your form from an second year elementary schooler to a baby."
   
 
Hearing what I said, Tamamo used both her legs to start climbing onto my body.
 
Hearing what I said, Tamamo used both her legs to start climbing onto my body.
   
"Aiya, thou should stop complaining. Think of something quickly. Good fortune will come from carrying a deity. Haha!"
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"Aiya, thou should stop complaining. Think of something quickly. Good fortune will come from carry a deity. Haha!"
   
 
Using both hands to support Tamamo's bottom, who was rubbing herself excitedly against my body, I lifted her up....
 
Using both hands to support Tamamo's bottom, who was rubbing herself excitedly against my body, I lifted her up....
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"Hiraga from Amdo was around this area for quite some time just now, we're screwed now."
 
"Hiraga from Amdo was around this area for quite some time just now, we're screwed now."
   
"It'll definitely be snatched away if it's discovered. Once that girl sees something sweet, even the color of her eyes changes."
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"It'll definitely be snatched away if it's discovered. Once that guy sees something sweet, even the color of her eyes changes."
   
 
"Here, here. Let's hide here and eat... ah, Kinji...."
 
"Here, here. Let's hide here and eat... ah, Kinji...."
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That girl is well and truly a student from Inquesta.
 
That girl is well and truly a student from Inquesta.
   
Damn it, don't use your deductive reasoning skills in a place like this.
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Damn it, don't use your deductive reasoning skills is a place like this.
   
"That, well.... she really lost her way, than she was sent to me. She's my cousin."
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"That, well.... she really lost her way, then she was sent to me. She's my cousin."
   
 
"Uhn, yes. I wanted to see onii-chan."
 
"Uhn, yes. I wanted to see onii-chan."
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"Tamamo, I can bring you anywhere you want to go, but can you change your form?"
 
"Tamamo, I can bring you anywhere you want to go, but can you change your form?"
   
I feebly supported my hands on my knees, pleading with Tamamo.
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I feebly supported my hands on my kness, pleading with Tamamo.
   
 
A second year high school student walking around with a little girl. even if it wasn't those people just now, other people might report me as well.
 
A second year high school student walking around with a little girl. even if it wasn't those people just now, other people might report me as well.
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"I really don't like it much here...."
 
"I really don't like it much here...."
   
Reaching the SSR building, I felt a lost of interest due to the appearance of the building.
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Reach the SSR building, I felt a lost of interest due to the appearance of the building.
   
 
Firstly, the entrance was a vermillion gateway, it was like a tunnel directly linking to the building.
 
Firstly, the entrance was a vermillion gateway, it was like a tunnel directly linking to the building.
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Greeting me politely, Shirayuki came out to receive me, dressed in her Miko garb.
 
Greeting me politely, Shirayuki came out to receive me, dressed in her Miko garb.
   
There was a 3-way mirror left slightly ajar in the room, could it be because she was putting on make-up just now?
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There was a 3-way mirror left slightly ajar in the room, could it because she was putting on make-up just now?
   
 
(Actually there's no need to go through so much preparation just to greet me....)
 
(Actually there's no need to go through so much preparation just to greet me....)
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The Miko garb's skirt fluttered in the air, coming to a pause at the time she knelt down.
 
The Miko garb's skirt fluttered in the air, coming to a pause at the time she knelt down.
   
"It has been a long time since paying my respects, I didn't know you were coming. I'm deeply sorry that I have prepared nothing!"
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"It's has been a long time since paying my respects, I didn't know you were coming. I'm deeply sorry that I have prepared nothing!"
   
 
Shirayuki was like an employee who saw a supervisor on a surprise visit.
 
Shirayuki was like an employee who saw a supervisor on a surprise visit.
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"Then.... what will it take to end the war?"
 
"Then.... what will it take to end the war?"
   
"Total annihilation or surrender. Tis either Deen or Grenada's soldiers gets wiped out, or all the soldiers of one side choose to surrender. Conditional surrender is recognised as well."
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"Total annihilation or surrender. Tis either Deen or Grenada's soldiers gets wiped out, or all the soldiers of one side choose to surrender. Conditional surrender are recognised as well."
   
 
This seems to be the same as wars of the outside world.
 
This seems to be the same as wars of the outside world.

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