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The enemy had altered the previous setup.
 
The enemy had altered the previous setup.
   
Not only was she focusing on Margot this time, but instead of splitting them up between fore and aft, they were now split up between opposite corners of the barrier: the starboard fore and the port aft.
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Not only was she focusing on Margot this time, but instead of splitting them up between fore and aft, they were now spit up between opposite corners of the barrier: the starboard fore and the port aft.
   
 
…''This is not good!
 
…''This is not good!
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The Schwarz Hexen had intentionally taken the hit, but Marine doubted the girl could use her left hand.
 
The Schwarz Hexen had intentionally taken the hit, but Marine doubted the girl could use her left hand.
   
The enemy no longer had use of their left arms.
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The enemy no longer had used of their left arms.
   
 
They were both right-handed, so that would not prevent them from attacking.
 
They were both right-handed, so that would not prevent them from attacking.
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She had had her own reasons for this battle and this was the result. Asama stepped inside and spoke.
 
She had had her own reasons for this battle and this was the result. Asama stepped inside and spoke.
   
“If you need anything, the Asama Shrine will help you out, so I look forward to working with you.”
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“If you need anything, the Asama Shrien will help you out, so I look forward to working with you.”
   
 
The woman did not acknowledge her. But Naruze sighed, and…
 
The woman did not acknowledge her. But Naruze sighed, and…

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