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Sakai forced his body to struggle against the movement which led his right shoulder to fall towards the floor.
 
Sakai forced his body to struggle against the movement which led his right shoulder to fall towards the floor.
   
By thrusting his left hip up, he added another half of a revolution to his movement.
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By thrusting up his left hip, he added another half of a revolution to his movement.
   
A full turn. He landed in a crouching position.
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A full turn. He touched the ground, landing in a crouching position.
   
 
His feet touched the ground, stepping onto the sand.
 
His feet touched the ground, stepping onto the sand.
   
Simultaneously, he drew the dagger kept behind his waist halfway out of the scabbard, preparing for an attack coming from above.
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Simultaneously, he drew the dagger kept behind his waist halfway out of the scabbard, preparing for an attack from the top.
   
 
While bringing his left hand inward to restrain any attacks coming from the left, he hauled himself up with the same hand.
 
While bringing his left hand inward to restrain any attacks coming from the left, he hauled himself up with the same hand.

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