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The air around the vacuums was stretched as if being torn into pieces before streaming in.
 
The air around the vacuums was stretched as if being torn into pieces before streaming in.
   
However, this too happened instantaneously. The air that accompanied this flow was cooled, wrapped by microscopic ice particles akin to mist. The next instant, it exploded in all directions.
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However, this too happened instantaneously. The air that accompanied this flow was cooled, wrapped by microscopic particles akin to mist. The next instant, it exploded in all directions.
   
 
Sound and fury reigned.
 
Sound and fury reigned.

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