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The street was the shortest path. Despite this, it was the path that the enemies were targeting.
 
The street was the shortest path. Despite this, it was the path that the enemies were targeting.
   
However, the warriors of the assault team were behind him and starting to advance with a2.
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However, the warriors of the assault team were behind him and starting to advance with A2.
   
 
Going first and drawing the enemy out was his duty.
 
Going first and drawing the enemy out was his duty.
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“—!”
 
“—!”
   
a1 expelled the air that had been stored to the limit within its wings.
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A1 expelled the air that had been stored to the limit within its wings.
   
 
Pressed forward by the resulting explosion of air, a1 burst forth in a straight line forward. Chaining some shots from his cannon, he blew apart the enemies that came within his automatic targeting sights. Even as he did this, he simply continued straight on, scattering white papers in his wake.
 
Pressed forward by the resulting explosion of air, a1 burst forth in a straight line forward. Chaining some shots from his cannon, he blew apart the enemies that came within his automatic targeting sights. Even as he did this, he simply continued straight on, scattering white papers in his wake.
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When this happened, a shot would come from the skies and he would be saved. It was a3, in the high skies. The reason he was able to fire the long range air-superiority weaponry against the surface was because he was sharing targeting information with a1. a1 was also using a3’s audiovisual information to roughly calculate the enemies’ positions before firing.
 
When this happened, a shot would come from the skies and he would be saved. It was a3, in the high skies. The reason he was able to fire the long range air-superiority weaponry against the surface was because he was sharing targeting information with a1. a1 was also using a3’s audiovisual information to roughly calculate the enemies’ positions before firing.
   
He went. Even while supporting and firing, a1 simply chose to move forward.
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He went. Even while supporting and firing, A1 simply chose to move forward.
   
 
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