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But in the center of the town a store stayed open, utterly still in this bustle of activity.
 
But in the center of the town a store stayed open, utterly still in this bustle of activity.
   
It was a café on the second starboard ship, tucked into an alley near the center-point of Tama’s surface.
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It was a cafe on the second starboard ship, tucked into an alley near the center-point of Tama’s surface.
   
 
Two signs were set up in front of the bakery. One had the words “shopkeeper making a delivery”, and the other had the words “open for business”.
 
Two signs were set up in front of the bakery. One had the words “shopkeeper making a delivery”, and the other had the words “open for business”.
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“Aerial-use models that don’t have feet. Just like the battle-hungry Tres España. Even though we don’t even think about trying to leave Musashi, they’re showing us how much their fingers’re itching for the trigger…it’s the worst. I wonder if I’ll do some research on the pilots and have them star in our school’s Manga Research Club’s homo-manga. Tres España’ll always be the receiver…!”
 
“Aerial-use models that don’t have feet. Just like the battle-hungry Tres España. Even though we don’t even think about trying to leave Musashi, they’re showing us how much their fingers’re itching for the trigger…it’s the worst. I wonder if I’ll do some research on the pilots and have them star in our school’s Manga Research Club’s homo-manga. Tres España’ll always be the receiver…!”
   
“Then, who from our class should be the pitcher side? …But well, being Technohexen and of an irregular race like you and Nai-chan, going outside is more troublesome. Nai-chan thinks that they’re also doing their work.
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“Then, who from our class should be the pitcher side? …But well, being technohexen and of an irregular race like you and Nai-chan, going outside is more troublesome. Nai-chan thinks that they’re also doing their work.
   
 
“Masa-yan said it was pretty terrible. These gods of war are one of the models of Tres’ brand ‘San Mercado’, but their technological skills are lacking so the drive threads are K.P.A. Italian made. All they have is their pride, so they’re stuck guarding most of Musashi’s circuit of the eastern countries. Tres España are going bankrupt.”
 
“Masa-yan said it was pretty terrible. These gods of war are one of the models of Tres’ brand ‘San Mercado’, but their technological skills are lacking so the drive threads are K.P.A. Italian made. All they have is their pride, so they’re stuck guarding most of Musashi’s circuit of the eastern countries. Tres España are going bankrupt.”
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“Hey…! Don’t make so much noise and hurt the ship…!”
 
“Hey…! Don’t make so much noise and hurt the ship…!”
   
“Ga-chan, Taizou-chan from engineering is being simply unreasonable.”
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“Gacchan, Taizou-chan from engineering is being simply unreasonable.”
   
 
“Your tendency to just give up is simply splendid, Naito. You couldn’t care less about the threats from the higher up.”
 
“Your tendency to just give up is simply splendid, Naito. You couldn’t care less about the threats from the higher up.”
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That was where the white haired automaton, P-01s, stood.
 
That was where the white haired automaton, P-01s, stood.
   
She was wearing the café’s apron, controlling two brooms with gravity control so as to clean the storefront. She nodded her head towards the female shopkeeper’s calls which came from within the shop; but her eyes were distant, looking towards Shinagawa.
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She was wearing the cafe’s apron, controlling two brooms with gravity control so as to clean the storefront. She nodded her head towards the female shopkeeper’s calls which came from within the shop; but her eyes were distant, looking towards Shinagawa.
   
 
“Waaah,” a group of desperate battle-cries could be heard from the direction P-01s was facing.
 
“Waaah,” a group of desperate battle-cries could be heard from the direction P-01s was facing.

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