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…''Mary-sama?
 
…''Mary-sama?
   
That did not make sense either. Double Bloody Mary was imprisoned in the southwestern tower, she occasionally made an appearance for the people of London, and that had continued while he had been with Scarred.
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That did not make sense either. Double Bloody Mary was imprisoned in the southwestern tower, she occasionally showed made an appearance for the people of London, and that had continued while he had been with Scarred.
   
 
…''Then who is she?
 
…''Then who is she?
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…''H-how indecent! More! More!
 
…''H-how indecent! More! More!
   
His outer facade and true thoughts mixed together, but when he tried to speak aloud, nothing came out.
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His outer façade and true thoughts mixed together, but when he tried to speak aloud, nothing came out.
   
 
“…!?”
 
“…!?”
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She and the white flower were there.
 
She and the white flower were there.
   
Her eyebrows were raised, her lips were pursed, and she was staring intently at the other version of herself.
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Here eyebrows were raised, her lips were pursed, and she was staring intently at the other version of herself.
   
 
Tenzou noticed a few tears in the corners of her eyes and that her shoulders were rising and falling a bit.
 
Tenzou noticed a few tears in the corners of her eyes and that her shoulders were rising and falling a bit.

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